Hey, thank you for listening! -------------------- Walking these concrete streets of New York tonight Watching her shine, diamond gleaming so bright Upper East Side princess, her world so far from mine Just another dreamer on this city's design Oh, if only money could bridge this divide If status could open the world that she rides She's living her dream, and I'm standing outside Poor me The city divides Tribeca dreams, Hudson Yards shine Poor me Left behind the line Her friends all around her, designer and free While I'm just a shadow beneath the city's marquee One block makes the difference, one check changes the game In this city of windows, we're not quite the same New York tells a story of who gets to climb Who breaks through the barriers, who gets left behind Dreams are just postcards we send to ourselves Hoping someone will read between the lines She's living her dream, and I'm standing outside Poor me The city decides Tribeca dreams, Hudson Yards gleam Poor me JUST ANOTHER DREAM! Poor me Just another dream in the city's design... Just another dream... ----------------------- Your support is my inspiration. In Public Domain -----------------------
70 Comments
RandoPengu 3w ago
I really felt this one - the atmosphere creeps in quietly and just stays with you. That line about postcards from dreams really hit - simple but so spot-on. And the sense of loneliness in the middle of New York really came through.
StuckInBetween 3w ago
Love it! Some advice from a fellow creator though! Sometimes use beautiful words like gaze, sight, beautiful and etc! Sorry wasn't trying to correct just giving advice!
VDK 7w ago
The song pairs a beautiful melody with the serious theme of social divide in New York and the unfulfilled longing to belong.🔥🔥🔥
inquieeCreator 7w ago
hey vdk, i deeply appreciate your words. 🙏✨
when i poured myself into this piece, i wanted to capture the ache of standing on the outside, reaching for something just out of grasp. thousands move to nyc believing in an achievable dream..... only to realize it was just an illusion. in this city, dreams can feel both dazzling and distant, hoping they’ll one day be real. i hope i was able to capture it.
Thanks for listening!🙏✨🎶🎵
Alleyg8er 8w ago
Catchy song, and the storyline is so vivid. I especially love the line "Dreams are just postcards we send to ourselves". Great metaphor. Super composition. 👍👍👍
inquieeCreator 8w ago
Hey, thanks a bunch! I'm happy you enjoyed it! I had the wildest dream a few days ago! I jotted down all the details in the morning and then got to work on it from there. 🤟🏻
Zombie Robby 3w ago
inquiee , complimenti per essere finito nei Top 10 V4.5 ...un grande riconoscimento . almeno per Suno .
CarlosDill2025 3w ago
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💗💗💗💗💗💗💖💖💖💖💖💖💖✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️💞💞💞💞 Eu Fiz uma música de Nova Yorque. Espero que goste.💖💖💖✨️✨️✨️
