
Verse 1 [soft melody, gentle strumming] 窗边的椅子,轻轻摇晃, 一杯咖啡,思绪飘远。 "Take a seat," 我轻声说, 阳光洒在你的肩。 Chorus [uptempo, energetic] 让我们看向那扇窗, "window of the world," 景色美好。 心跳加速,期待漫长, 在这里,等待你。 Verse 2 [seconds later, melody shifts] 你走近来,微笑在眼, 我移开位置,"take a seat" 也是。 陌生人之间,话语绽放, 夜色渐深,心灵靠近。 Bridge [emotional swell] 时间静止,世界缓慢, 在这一刻,心跳共鸣。 "Strangers in the night," 但此刻, 我们共享这份温暖。 Chorus [energetic, harmonized] 让我们看向那扇窗, "window of the world," 景色美好。 心跳加速,期待漫长, 在这里,等待你。 Outro [soft, reflective] 窗外的风,轻轻诉说, 我们相遇的故事。 "Take a seat," 在这窗前, 共享这美好时光。
9 Comments
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
我不會你(妳)的語言,但我願意學,因為我想靠近你(妳)。
所以我一直嘗試用多國的語言來創作! 我相信這是一種可以接近您們並與您們產生交流共鳴的方法
Vash4-2-0 5w ago
so far you been doing ok with English. or at least I think it's ok
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
我想將您手上已冷卻的咖啡倒掉... 換一杯可溫暖您心的咖啡! 繼續陪您一起等她的到來! 現在不是您一個人在此.... 靜靜地等待某個人的出現!
G Chill 5w ago
Beautiful how the two languages intertwine!
Vash4-2-0 5w ago
Thanks GChill first time trying out my Chinese
Vash4-2-0 5w ago
I could of used some different words but my brain wasn't able to think of the spelling
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
有需要我協助... 就跟我說! 中文嘛! 小事一件
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
我先說優點吧
畫面感強:像是在咖啡店裡拍的一支短片,尤其是 "窗边的椅子,一杯咖啡"、"陽光灑在你的肩" 等畫面很溫暖,是很容易代入。
節奏設計清楚:每段都有情緒轉變(Verse → Chorus → Bridge → Outro),歌曲結構完整,有升有降。
中英混搭自然
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
我相信您心臟夠強, 所以我就把我的看法說給您聽, 這首歌像一杯溫熱的拿鐵.....溫柔、舒服、沒有壞味道,但也還沒成為讓人驚艷的經典口感。
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
太棒了😍😍😍
Vash4-2-0 5w ago
Thanks (maybe) that means a lot wasn't sure if I spelled everything right
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
Take a Seat by the Window (Dual Edition) for you! BOSS
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
拼音沒問題
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
反正趁她沒來前... 我們一起唱首歌.. 總可以吧????
Maybe ( 眉媚) 5w ago
我也等待您.....等您點歌! 點頭