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夢のかけら

https://suno.com/song/f97436b1-441c-4ab9-9939-6c57ef7b89c7 這首我已完成重
September 24, 2024 at 8:16 AMv3.5

我已將此曲 重新製作完成 💖 Maybe 💞520 1314💞 https://suno.com/song/f97436b1-441c-4ab9-9939-6c57ef7b89c7 [Aメロ] 静かな夜の風が 遠くの記憶を運ぶ 君の声も消えて 今はただ空を見てる [Aメロ] あの日の笑顔さえも 涙に溶けて消えて 触れられないほどに 君が遠くなっていく [Bメロ] 忘れたいのに忘れられない 君との日々が胸に残ってる 壊れそうな心の奥で 夢のかけらがまだ輝いて [サビ] もう一度、あの場所で 君に会えるなら 消えないこの痛みも 許せる気がする けれど時は残酷で 全て奪い去って ただ夢のかけらだけが 心に散りばめられてる [Aメロ] 沈んだ月の影が 僕をひとりにさせる 君の微笑みさえ 闇に消えていった [Bメロ] どんなに遠く離れても 君の面影が瞼を閉じれば 消えそうな夢の欠片が 胸の中でまだ輝いて [サビ] もう一度、あの時に 戻れるのならば 僕は君を守れる 今でもそう信じてる だけど時は残酷で 全てを奪い去って ただ夢のかけらだけが 心を彷徨っている [Cメロ] いつかまた、会える日まで この痛みも抱きしめて 夢のかけらを集めて 未来へ歩いていこう [アウトロ]

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30 Comments

NovelMind

NovelMind 14w ago

You're a terrific songwriter. I appreciate all you do! -William

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 14w ago

Thank you for your kind words and generous praise—I truly appreciate it. I can only hope to continue creating songs that resonate with others. Your encouragement means a lot to me and serves as a great motivation to keep improving.

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Wyn Ath Inorum

Wyn Ath Inorum 7w ago

I'm in love with this song, I love it so much! Wonderful job, I only wish it had a proper ending. Perhaps one day if you remaster this song, you can add a proper ending. Other than that, I really adore this song very much! Keep it the great work, you are very good at lyrics, and being creative for your songs! 💕

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 7w ago

我已經以重製過 您可能沒注意到 我寫的

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jamzy7

jamzy7 9w ago

Wow this is powerful: "The quiet night breeze
Carries distant memories
Even your voice has faded
Now I just gaze at the sky"

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞
這都歸功於您們的愛 , 當🖤轉換為💖

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Paul Dorsey-Fletcher🐦

Paul Dorsey-Fletcher🐦 8w ago

Dear Maybe, when you find the time, what are your favorite songs so far you have made on here that you would point me to? Even though the track cuts off, the music is lovely… I know only Korean and not Japanese nor Chinese… yet. 🤔🤠 The lyrics read deeply melancholic, but at my reading and listening level the song itself sounds beautiful. 🫡

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

韓文歌曲 我比較少 ,,,但我很貪心.. 所以我很難取捨... 這首歌是我剛踏進SUNO的一項比賽 沒啥技巧 所以我沒用太多時間去完成這首, 不過很意外 SUNO 給了我一個安慰獎吧 100元美金 哈哈 扣稅後95元 ! 看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞
這都歸功於您們的愛 , 當🖤轉換為💖

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EmpyrealRadio840

EmpyrealRadio840 8w ago

Super music

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞

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TantalizingHeavyMetal8555

TantalizingHeavyMetal8555 8w ago

I got inspired by. You. ..harmony. ..jimmy

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞
這都歸功於您們的愛 , 當🖤轉換為💖

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Dj ProMusica

Dj ProMusica 9w ago

The bassline pumping real cool in this 🎵 🎶 🎵. This is amazing

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞
這都歸功於您們的愛 , 當🖤轉換為💖

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Suno Star Beats (sunox)💫🧿

Suno Star Beats (sunox)💫🧿 11w ago

❤️👏👏

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 7w ago

💋💋💋. Maybe 💞520 1314💞

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BluesyCrossfade5055

BluesyCrossfade5055 14w ago

好聽

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 14w ago

The comment "好聽" really touched me!! Thank you!

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ESTERINA MATRAR

ESTERINA MATRAR 8w ago

LIVIDI NASCOSTI è entrata nella ALL TIME ITALIA

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞

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jamzy7

jamzy7 9w ago

Wow, this is really nice! we should collaborate for a TikTok and Youtube channel or something, your lyrics are awesome:

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 9w ago

感謝您 !這麼支持💋 事實上 我完全沒在經管 YouTube 及 TikTok ,偶爾想到才去逛逛 , 我不厲害... 我喜歡挑戰我自己罷了

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TADANO

TADANO 10w ago

เสียงร้องไพเราะชวนให้ฝันหวาน (The sweet singing voice invites sweet dreams.)

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞
這都歸功於您們的愛 , 當🖤轉換為💖

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MirrorSoul- Reality Strings

MirrorSoul- Reality Strings 10w ago

A piece of a cruel dream, dramatic despite the language difference, you still convey the feelings.

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 8w ago

看到來自您的💌, 獻上我無限的愛 同時也包含感恩的心,Maybe 💞520 1314💞
這都歸功於您們的愛 , 當🖤轉換為💖

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Infinity2

Infinity2 11w ago

私は個人的な質問があります、あなたは女の子ですか、それとも男ですか? なぜ歌はとても悲しいのですか?

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 10w ago

君の問いかけ、まるで魔法の呪文みたいだね。僕は秘密の花園に住んでいる自由な魂さ。でも、君はどんな鍵を持っているのか、ちょっと興味あるな

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TKama

TKama 7w ago

旋律與歌詞完美融合,深深傳達出對離去之人的思念與情感。
特別是這段:「哪怕相隔再遙遠,閉上眼仍浮現你的身影,快要消失的夢之碎片,在我心中依然閃耀」——真的深深打動了我。
謝謝你創作出這麼動人的作品。願這首歌能感動更多人的心。❤️

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SAINT ✞

SAINT ✞ 6w ago

I like it !!! 🔥 check me out for nice summer vibes 🥥🌴

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spearfalcon730224

spearfalcon730224 6w ago

路過,我不擅長寫日文歌,現在正在寫法文歌(很久沒寫了),寫對小情侶吵架後在下雨天和好的心情。

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 6w ago

加油! Love U!!💞. Maybe 💞520 1314💞 加油!

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Callisto

Callisto 7w ago

Wow it's great😍🖤

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Troy

Troy 7w ago

Very nice

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Dasaka CZ

Dasaka CZ 7w ago

Beautiful, gentle and that ethereal voice, I really like it. :-)))

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Maybe ( 眉媚)

Maybe ( 眉媚) 6w ago

Love U!!💞. Maybe 💞520 1314💞

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