
"A Marionette's Thorned Waltz"
Prologue (0:00–0:18) “She dances not by will, but string — Each step a sin, each smile a sting.” Scene I (0:19–0:41) The master carved her spine from oak And hung her name beneath his cloak Scene II (0:42–1:05) She dreamed in silence stitched with glass And bled in shoes of painted brass Chorus A (1:06–1:30) Thorns of the marionette Pull her breath where guilt is set Curtains fall with strings undone But still she dances without sun Scene III (1:31–1:53) Her shadow mimed the queen of ash Whose reign was held in shattered flash Interlude (1:54–2:14) —instrumental, no lyrics— Chorus B (2:15–2:39) Thorns of the marionette Bound in wax, but never set Each vow she screams in pantomime Unheard beyond the strings of time Monologue (2:40–3:05) “Unlace the faith they tied in thread — The living weep, the carved are fed.” Final Chorus (3:06–3:31) Thorns of the marionette Cursed in wood, a pirouette Let fire snip the final chord And free the soul her limbs ignored Curtain (3:32–3:57) —no lyrics; only final soprano note, string snap, and silence—

25 Comments
Chosen-MusicCreator 8w ago
Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear friend. I'm glad you liked it. 💙💙💙
Chosen-MusicCreator 8w ago
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
I hope you get the results you want in your own attempts — I'm looking forward to hearing them.😍
Chosen-MusicCreator 8w ago
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Yes, it feels like an unusual piece, but the more I listened to it, the more I felt I had to share it.
I enjoy mixing different styles.
The interstice bard 7w ago
Absolutely magnificent! The lyrics were beautiful, and the vocals were really poignant! I loved the chorus especially!🔥🔥🔥🙌🙌🙌
𝕊𝕚𝕟𝕘 MΞ 𝕊𝕠𝕟𝕘 . 𝓬𝓸𝓶 8w ago
The gothic opera elements are especially striking, and I appreciate your willingness to experiment and push boundaries it really pays off in this track!😍
Chosen-MusicCreator 8w ago
Thank you for your kind words, I’m glad you liked it.
I enjoy trying different things in each of my songs, and when great results come out of it, it makes me really happy.
Receiving your appreciation means a lot to me and motivates me even more.😍
Chosen-MusicCreator 8w ago
Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you liked it. I'm especially happy that it matched your taste.😍
Chosen-MusicCreator 8w ago
Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you liked it. I love energy :)❤️❤️❤️