https://suno.com/@subliminalvibrato4989 Reply to this great song: https://suno.com/song/d431e71c-d196-4dd5-ab19-89dc76666e26 IDALTA, I saw that you mentioned me several times but didn’t involve me directly, so I stayed back and watched in silence. What are you looking for? Do you want to be part of the EDGELORDS? I have no problem with that—my doors are always open. Or do you want my recognition? That’s easy for anyone to get. Love me, and I will love you even more. This song is for you. You know, I want to thank you because you’re giving me the chance to pay tribute to one of my favorite artists. Kanye is the king as a beatmaker, but believe it or not, my favorite album of his is Jesus Is King. [Disclaimer: This song is in no way intended to be disrespectful toward religion or believers in general. It is purely fantasy.] ************************** [Intro – Soft organ chords, atmospheric pad, distant choir humming] Father, I have sinned, I’ve been full of pride, Desired their women, left my own behind. Broke hearts, broke trust, played the game of lies, Corrupt in the dark, with corrupted minds. I’ve bought and sold what can’t be priced, Tricked and deceived just to feel alive. Used their beauty to shine my own, Devil inside, and I’ve always known. (Can a devil be forgiven?) (Or is my fate already written?) (Bound to fall with no redemption,) (But does a devil seek salvation?) [Hook ] Use this gospel, take a moment, Father, tell me why the devil’s chosen. Evil lingers, yet can it change? Are the roles all set in place? [Expressive sax melody enters, soaring over the beat Reverbed and smooth tone, giving a jazzy, reflective contrast Beat remains steady, letting the sax shine over the instrumental] [Bridge – Beat fades, organ and pad remain, spoken word or auto-tuned vocals] Is it sin to tempt, is it sin to crave? Is it sin to be this way? To be the ocean, to be adored, To give both dreams and despair at the door? Bitter and sweet like the darkest of chocolate, A taste they want but never forgotten. Is it wrong to be what they chase? Or is this the price of a fallen embrace? [Rap verse – Flow switches up, more aggressive delivery] Wished for death upon my foes, Stole their gifts, now I wear their clothes. Arrogant yet lost in doubt, An impostor wrapped in a sinner’s shroud. If the writer knew the ending first, Is there choice or just a curse? Do you hear me, Father, or am I lost? Are we guilty? Are we not? [Hook repeats – More intensity, additional harmonies] Use this gospel, take a moment, Father, tell me why the devil’s chosen. Evil lingers, yet can it change? Are the roles all set in place? [Outro – Choir fades out, organ and pad sustain, final whispered line] Forgive me, Father, if I ask too much— But I am just a devil, after all…

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🛑 Lucilius 🛑

🛑 Lucilius 🛑 14w ago

How eclectic! This song also symbolizes a lot of things. You are an integral part of Suno's life. You are writing his story. Thank you for what you do for the community.

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

It's a story we will write together, my friend.
I will bring drama, love, plot twists, and the creation of new bonds.
This is how I live the creative process, and you are a fundamental part of this journey.

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Kichi

Kichi 14w ago

This song is incredible!! Powerful, raw, and beautifully crafted. You almost can feel the darkness🩷💚

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Your compliments are the ones I love the most, my queen. Thank you!💗💚

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Amateur Lyricist

Amateur Lyricist 14w ago

Controversial choice of words, but damn this is liiiiiitt!!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Banal, scandalous, or disrespectful?
Thank you, my friend, your compliments are truly appreciated!

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RabbitHorseRunning

RabbitHorseRunning 14w ago

WOAH. This is freakin' awesome.

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Thank you, my friend. I really appreciate the compliments!

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IDALTA

IDALTA 14w ago

Man, you seemed to open up a lot in this song! As for what I want, The Jester offered to put in the Theomachy or EDGELORDS but said it wasn't up to him, then asked you what you wanted to do.

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Thank you, my friend. Get ready—soon it will be Theomachy's turn to strike as Edgelords!

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IN THE MIDNIGHT HOUR

IN THE MIDNIGHT HOUR 14w ago

@MatchaChocolate69 this song is EVERYTHING! 🔥 I love, love, LOVE how you break boundaries, push limits, and dive into that raw, unapologetic shadow side. The edginess, the depth, the fearless exploration of darkness and redemption—it speaks to me. 💀🔥 The beat? Mesmerizing. The lyrics? Cut deep. This isn’t just music, it’s a journey into the parts of ourselves we don’t always face—and I’m HERE for it. 🙌🏾 I FEEL this song, I IDENTIFY with it, and I can’t stop vibing to it. Y’all really did th

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🛑 Lucilius 🛑

🛑 Lucilius 🛑 14w ago

@in the midnight hour: I love your constructive and detailed comments. Behind every user beats the heart of a human being.

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🛑 Lucilius 🛑

🛑 Lucilius 🛑 14w ago

Lyrics 💚/10 | Music 🩷/10 | Gen Quality🤍/10

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Lucilius God/10 💚🛑

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Alien Kei

Alien Kei 14w ago

This Song Is fire, i love so much, great work 🔥

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Fire, like the one I will find in the hell I am condemned to. 🔥
Thank you, my friend!

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🌹Roseofpassion🌹

🌹Roseofpassion🌹 14w ago

Matcha mi Rey keep shining. Like Lucilius wrote below 10/10 all the way through. You have a big suno family that will always support your creations! Could not say more suno flags what I waned to say here and in kichis also,

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

As long as you're here to inspire me with your passion, I will keep doing it. Thank you for being my Latina muse. (Muah!)

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Jorshua

Jorshua 14w ago

Lyrics 6/10 | Music 7/10 | Gen Quality 7.5/10
Lyrics feel like a nice in-between of gen and human; just enough to inject some emotion into the song without being distracting. Musically, not many faults here. It might have gone better with a heavier vibe, or maybe orchestral. It might have even just needed that incredibly cheesy e-sax to be replaced by a piano. Gen quality is good, a couple small shimmers but nothing that would stop me from listening to it.

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Thank you for the honest feedback, my friend.
We should always strive to improve, and your insights are helpful for that.
The sax is indeed a bit cheesy, but that adjective fits me well too. I was actually trying to replicate Kenny G's sax in Use This Gospel by Kanye.

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竜宮式

竜宮式 14w ago

Good song, good lyrics. nice!

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Thank you so much, my friend!

MØRI-GANN

MØRI-GANN 14w ago

This is so edgy, I love it so much 🔥

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

Edgyness is a lifestyle, and that's exactly why I'm drawn to your profile, my friend. Thank you!!

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Jing

Jing 14w ago

Nice to see you, my friend, welcome to my channel. Thanks!

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

I already feel at home, thank you, my friend!

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🖤𝓔𝓵𝓵𝓪🩷

🖤𝓔𝓵𝓵𝓪🩷 14w ago

This gave me chills. I keep hearing it and I feel like crying. This was open, beautiful and honest.

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🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿

🩸MatchaChocolate69🗿 14w ago

That's a beautiful compliment, Ella.
If my music and words can evoke emotions, then I can say I’ve achieved my goal.
Thank you, my friend.

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PsalmWellProduction

PsalmWellProduction 8w ago

i love this

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MarkWu_vvip24

MarkWu_vvip24 13w ago

Your lyrics and use of descriptive command tags are absolutely masterful !

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⚉☯️ꍌꁝꄲꇙ꓄ ꒐ꋊ ꓄ꁝꏂ ꇙꌦꇙ꓄ꏂꂵ☯️⚉

⚉☯️ꍌꁝꄲꇙ꓄ ꒐ꋊ ꓄ꁝꏂ ꇙꌦꇙ꓄ꏂꂵ☯️⚉ 14w ago

Macha The saxophone yes yes yes!!!<<<<<love this>>>>>

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Jedidiah Breeze

Jedidiah Breeze 5w ago

This is nice

J2W   (●'◡'●) ......works in progress

J2W (●'◡'●) ......works in progress 5w ago

what if we were all poor devils?