
Albricias de Insomnia #TheTavern

I wasn't going to release this one, it's another very early attempts at Suno (I didn't understand how to use the Extend feature for more than 1 part, so, this is one very old poems that I wrote as a short story. I'm really talking a Long time ago, after several versions and attempts, the first part of the story didn't fit the rest, so, it's missing from the song. I'll try to translate it a little later, I want to thank you for the support and the wonderful comments I've received,, this is a very different song, and might be a little "raw", but I wanted to share it with you. To #TheTavern : The writer in this story might not be "exactly a bard" , but consider his muse as a fairy, and "Insomnia" as the incarnation of, yes, "insomnia" and they band together to play with "the bard" in this story... The first part might be missing, but I'm pretty sure you will imagine it (In the first part, his muse has really rolled him on his bed) I asked GPT to translate it real quick for you) ------------------------------------------------------------------- [Instrumental] [Verse 1] Insomnia mocks me, Watching me from the carpet, It has thrown me out of bed, With the old trick Of forcing me to write. [Verse 2] But tonight, Insomnia Isn’t being quiet, Tonight, the joke is on it, I invoke my muse, Even though I’m still completely confused. [Verse 3] She comes close to the window, Tempting, my muse, Summoned wrongly, Summoned by Insomnia. [Chorus 1] Insomnia teams up With the night wind, In hesitant urgency, The two become one. [Instrumental Break] [Build] [Crescendo] [Dramatic Drums] [Stop] [Refrain] [Break] [Choir] [Bridge] [Choir] [Gregorian Choir] (Whirlwinds blow, (Their breath strikes my muse, (And she falls like an insect, (My eyes don’t believe it, (She has fallen from the sky, (Loud and sudden, the crash, [Male vocals And Choir] What a fall, no need to explain! [Break] [Instrumental break] [Gregorian choir] [Choir 1] [Choir 2] Fearful, expectant, I approach the window. [Choir 2][Build] [Dramatic outro] [Fade] [Refrain] [End] [3:30 minutes] [Continue from Part 1] [Male Voice] [Verse 1] On the sidewalk, my muse, A caricature, In the sky, a burst of laughter. [Verse 2] Insomnia mocks me, My muse resists, The wind hums in satire, Now separated from the night, And whoever disturbs it Gives its cruel joke a fine. [Chorus 1] I shout at my muse, I reach out my hand, Too far away, Insomnia has arrived. [Instrumental break] [Verse 3] She finally gets up, Rubs her back, Looks at me with distrust, Raises her hand! A brutal slap, Twists my neck, (Brute, it's called a neck) [Bridge] It’s a riddle, She solves it, Without any trouble, She reminds me of a date, Between the ninth and the eleventh, Of May. [Dramatic Choir] (A mother’s insult) (Say it completely) (Why are you playing dumb??) (They insulted your mother) (You got smacked) (And if you don’t make amends) (Why even say it) [Verse 4] She despises me! Blames me, Yet it was the ultra-muse Who pushed her. She fell from the sky, And blamed me. [Final Verse] The night covers her, She fades away, It’s already dawn, And I won’t sleep. [Instrumental] [Build] [Crescendo] [Sudden descent] [Pianissimo] [Outro] [Stop] [Refrain] [Instrumental] [Verse 1] Insomnia se mofa, De verme en la alfombra, Me ha tirado de la cama, Con la vieja argucia, De obligarme a escribir. [Verse 2] Pero esta noche Insomnia, No se porta tacíturna, Esta noche la broma es su tormento, Invoco a mi musa, Aún con atolondrado desconcierto. [Verse 3] A la ventana se acerca, Tentadora mi musa, Invocada errónea, Invocada de insomnia. [Chorus 1] Insomnia se asocia, Con el viento nocturno, En premura vacilante, Los dos se hacen uno. [Instrumental Break] [Build] [Crescendo] [Dramatic Drums] [Stop] [Refrain] [Break]] [Choir] [Bridge [PRE-DIALOGUE] [Gregorian Choir] (Soplan remolinos, (Su aliento golpea mi musa, (Y cae cual insecto, (Mis ojos no creen, (Ha caido del cielo, (Fuerte y fugaz el estruendo, [Male vocals And Choir] Vaya ranazo, pa’ que les cuento! [Break] [Instrumental break] [Gregorian choir] [Choir 1] [Choir 2] Temeroso expectante, A la ventana me acerco. [Choir 2][Build] [Dramatic outro] [Fade] [Continue from Pt 1] [Male Voice] [Chorus 3] En la acera; mi musa, Una caricatúra, En el cielo, una carcajada, [Verse 2] Insomnia se mofa, Mi musa retoba, El viento en sátira zumba, Divorciado de la noche, Quien molesta le impone, a su cruel broma una multa. [Chorus #] Le grito a mi musa, Tiendo mi mano, Demasiado lejos, Insomnia ha llegado. [Instrumental break] [Verse 3] Al fin se levanta, Se soba la espalda, Me vé con recélo, ¡Levanta su mano! Brutal cachetada, Me tuerce el pescuezo, (Bruto, se dice cuello) [Bridge #] Es un acertijo, Ella lo resuelve, Sin mayor problema, Me recuerda una fecha, Entre el nueve, y el once, De Mayo, [Dramatic Choir] [Cynical Vocal: Scolding] (Una mentada de madre) (Dilo completo) (Para que te haces güey??) = (Te mentaron la madre) (Te llevaste un madrazo ) (Y si no haces enmiendas) (Para que te digo) [Verse #] ¡me desprecia! Me culpa a mi, Y fue ultra musa quie la empujó Se cayo del cielo, Y a mi me culpó [ Verse#] La noche le cubre, Se desvanece, Ya es madrugada, Y no dormiré. [Instrumental] [Build] [Crescendo] [Sudden descent] [Pianissimo] [Outro] [Stop] [Refrain]
13 Comments
🌹Roseofpassion🌹 12w ago
Esto es puro caos poetico en la mejor forma. La personificacion de Insomnia, la caida dramatica de la musa y la mezcla de humor y frustracion una genialidad total. Excelente, Me encanto 🌹
Singularitybar 12w ago
Rose! Muchísimas gracias! No te imaginas lo maravilloso que fue encontrar tu comentario y me sacó una sonrisa inmediatamente. Un verdadero honor :-)
裴芸PuiWan 12w ago
this is such a cool and atmospheric song! the lyrics are like a journey through someone's mind.
Singularitybar 12w ago
Thank you so much 裴芸, You really understood 100% of it (and, yep, that chaotic mind would usually be mine :-)
Txema Albert 12w ago
Original, muy originl la idea de la canción )la letras) y su plasmación musical. Híbrida (y lo digo para bien) de muchos estilos. Pero la suma aporta y el resultado total.
Singularitybar 12w ago
Muchas muchas gracias Albert!
The Badfatler 12w ago
What an incredible story, man. I really dig the desperation to tell it in the vocals, and the story itself feels mysteriously relatable and important. Great work.
Singularitybar 12w ago
Thank you so much! I'm so glad yoiu liked it... That's pretty much how it feels many nights (I'm a Writer/Screenwriter, and it feels like that sometimes, albeit with a fantasy touch in here.
It's a different song, I have not published more songs in Spanish.
You are so very kind every time. Really thank you. I think the one I'll make public next will be of your liking (I hope)
Your songs are fantastic, I just need to find the time to listen to more :)
¥Θ₦ÌŦ, Í$ŖΓΔΞĹ🤍 10w ago
sweet and so warm! i love the melody. it's so wondeful. the words are beautiful too, and the picture is sweet And also conveys the feeling of the song. great job!🤍🔥
Singularitybar 10w ago
Thank you so much ! :-) It's cool that you mention it, I published this one earlier, I mean, like one or two months earlier. It seems the image made the whole difference, it was flying under the radar before this one... :-)
Thank you for your Very very beautiful words, you are awesome
Nadador Compulsivo 12w ago
Caray, qué bien suena... Tiene un rollo a Izal o Vetusta Morla, una lírica muy interesante. Me gusta mucho la construcción completa de la canción, la letra y la música, mi enhorabuena amigo...
Singularitybar 12w ago
Muchísimas gracias! más o menos, estaba pensando en alguien más bien de finales de los 80s cuando la terminé. ME da mucho gusto que te haya gustado!
Reis&Almirantes ⚓⚓⚓ 12w ago
Very nice song!!!
Singularitybar 12w ago
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it :-)
BlueSkyDreamers 12w ago
Awesome track. The music is somehow magical and rocking at the same time, and the vocals suit the feeling so well. The song notes are so interesting: “The writer in this story considers his muse as a fairy, and ‘Insomnia’ as the incarnation of insomnia.” The same as with the music, the lyrics are both magical and real as concrete at the same time, like: “She comes close to the window / Tempting, my muse / Summoned wrongly / Summoned by Insomnia…”
Singularitybar 12w ago
Blue, it is such a wonderful feeling to see you here and for you to have liked it :-) The beautiful comments about the song itself are both right on point and the reason I'm smiling ear to ear! :-)
Helicopter Girl 10w ago
This song is good, don't worry. My earlier songs some were so so. Now they're great! I still have a lot to learn about music arrangements 😆
Singularitybar 10w ago
Same in here! I've been trying to study as much as I can, time doesn't make it easy. For the first time in decades, I downloaded discord and just 2 days ago I joined the Suno discord, I hope it helps :-) Do you sometime use it?
Dasaka CZ 12w ago
Great song, :-))) insomnia is really an inspiration, I didn't sleep the night before last, there was a full moon and a new song was created. :-))
Singularitybar 12w ago
Dasaka! You really make smile with your comments and I think yes, that's how it happens. Insomnia is both the greatest feeling and sometimes, well, the reason we feel like zombies the next day :-)
Cassowari 11w ago
Really beautiful! 🖤Perfecto el AI vocalista que usaste!
Singularitybar 10w ago
Muchísimas muchísimas gracias... Las voces normalmente son un reto en Suno, a veces necesitan muchas versiones para que finalmente funcionen, de verdad, te agradeazco mucho el comentario :-)
SAINT ✞ 8w ago
This is so nice!
🎸gappfarr🎹 10w ago
wow👍