WORKIN ON MY SHYT

Smooth blues not raspy vocal, organ leads song off & heavy with guitar Trap Soul baritone male vocal smooth not raspy, Blues, Smooth, Vibe Smooth Soft Blues guitar, blues vibe, guitar, Memphis blues, B, B, King blues, heartfelt, blues, BPM between 60 and 70 for the blues vibe

HOOK (Two-Part Harmony – subtle humming)

I’m not perfect
I’m working on myself (soft hum / ooo…)

I’m not perfect
But I’m working on my shit (sustained hum behind line)

Working on my, working on my
Working on my shit (gentle hum / ooo… behind)

Working on my, working on my
Working on my shit (let last “shit” ring with soft hum)

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VERSE 1 (16 bars – blues pocketed, subtle hums)

I ain’t done working
working on myself (soft hum behind phrase)

Gave away everything 
Ain’t got nothing left (gentle humming behind line)

Ain’t forgave myself
For letting you go (soft ooo behind)

I’ll be getting high
Just to balance out my lows (drag “lows…”, soft hum under)

Ain’t it strange how
life seems to go (humming softly)

One minute you up
Next minute you on the floor (soft hum / ooo)

If if was a fifth
We’d all be drunk

Drunk as a skunk
for the whole damn month (“month” linger, soft hum fade)

(short sigh / hum before Hook)

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HOOK (Two-Part Harmony – repeat, subtle humming)

I’m not perfect
I’m working on myself (soft hum / ooo…)

I’m not perfect
But I’m working on my shit (gentle hum behind line)

Working on my, working on my
Working on my shit (soft sustained hum behind)

Working on my, working on my
Working on my shit (hold last “shit” with hum fade)

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VERSE 2 (Blues Response – reflective, subtle hums)

I’m picking up the pieces
Slowly, one by one (soft hum under line)

Trying not to drown
In what I’ve done (gentle hum behind)

I talk to myself
Late nights on the phone (soft sustained hum)

I’m learning to forgive
The things I’ve known (hum under line)

Ain’t running from the pain
Ain’t hiding from my lows (soft humming fill)

Each day I rise
And try to grow *(hum carry over “grow…”) *

I keep my head up
Even when it’s tough (soft hum)

I’m working on my shit
Cause that’s enough (sustained hum behind line)

If if was a fifth
We’d all be drunk (soft hum on “drunk”)

Drunk as a skunk
for the whole damn month (drag last “month…”, hum fade)

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HOOK RIDE / OUTRO (Two-Part Harmony + Hums, smooth ride)

If if was a fifth, we’d all be drunk
Working on my shit (soft sustained hum under line)

If if was a fifth, we’d all be drunk
Working on my shit (hum linger, gentle fade)

If if was a fifth, we’d all be drunk
Working on my shit (last “shit” rings, soft hum carries, repeat 2x softly)

(Let hum fade slowly into the final hook, giving space to breathe…)

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FINAL HOOK (Two-Part Harmony – soft, reflective)

I’m not perfect
I’m working on myself (soft hum / ooo… fade in from outro)

I’m not perfect
But I’m working on my shit (gentle sustained hum behind line)

Working on my, working on my
Working on my shit (soft hum underneath, let last “shit” hang naturally)

Working on my, working on my
Working on my shit (final hum fade, airy, reflective, closing vibe)

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HOOK (Two-Part Harmony – subtle humming) I’m not perfect I’m working on myself (soft hum / ooo…) I’m not perfect But I’m working on my shit (sustained hum behind line) Working on my, working on my Working on my shit (gentle hum / ooo… behind) Working on my, working on my Working on my shit (let last “shit” ring with soft hum) ⸻ VERSE 1 (16 bars – blues pocketed, subtle hums) I ain’t done working working on myself (soft hum behind phrase) Gave away everything Ain’t got nothing left (gentle humming behind line) Ain’t forgave myself For letting you go (soft ooo behind) I’ll be getting high Just to balance out my lows (drag “lows…”, soft hum under) Ain’t it strange how life seems to go (humming softly) One minute you up Next minute you on the floor (soft hum / ooo) If if was a fifth We’d all be drunk Drunk as a skunk for the whole damn month (“month” linger, soft hum fade) (short sigh / hum before Hook) ⸻ HOOK (Two-Part Harmony – repeat, subtle humming) I’m not perfect I’m working on myself (soft hum / ooo…) I’m not perfect But I’m working on my shit (gentle hum behind line) Working on my, working on my Working on my shit (soft sustained hum behind) Working on my, working on my Working on my shit (hold last “shit” with hum fade) ⸻ VERSE 2 (Blues Response – reflective, subtle hums) I’m picking up the pieces Slowly, one by one (soft hum under line) Trying not to drown In what I’ve done (gentle hum behind) I talk to myself Late nights on the phone (soft sustained hum) I’m learning to forgive The things I’ve known (hum under line) Ain’t running from the pain Ain’t hiding from my lows (soft humming fill) Each day I rise And try to grow *(hum carry over “grow…”) * I keep my head up Even when it’s tough (soft hum) I’m working on my shit Cause that’s enough (sustained hum behind line) If if was a fifth We’d all be drunk (soft hum on “drunk”) Drunk as a skunk for the whole damn month (drag last “month…”, hum fade) ⸻ HOOK RIDE / OUTRO (Two-Part Harmony + Hums, smooth ride) If if was a fifth, we’d all be drunk Working on my shit (soft sustained hum under line) If if was a fifth, we’d all be drunk Working on my shit (hum linger, gentle fade) If if was a fifth, we’d all be drunk Working on my shit (last “shit” rings, soft hum carries, repeat 2x softly) (Let hum fade slowly into the final hook, giving space to breathe…) ⸻ FINAL HOOK (Two-Part Harmony – soft, reflective) I’m not perfect I’m working on myself (soft hum / ooo… fade in from outro) I’m not perfect But I’m working on my shit (gentle sustained hum behind line) Working on my, working on my Working on my shit (soft hum underneath, let last “shit” hang naturally) Working on my, working on my Working on my shit (final hum fade, airy, reflective, closing vibe)

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