
Edge of a Choice
My Youtube Account: https://www.youtube.com/@JamesB1997 _____________________________________________________ This Is my other account https://suno.com/@immovableai97 _____________________________________________________ (Verse 1) I lost a child—felt my world break in two, My wife walked away; left nothing I knew. Days were dark and heavy, nights weighed down with pain, I stood at the crossroads, wondering if life was in vain. Every heartbeat echoed the loss I couldn’t bear, On the edge of a choice, caught in deep despair. (Pre-Chorus) In that final hour, with my soul feeling so low, The weight of every sorrow told me there was no place to go. (Verse 2) That night, alone with regrets and a heavy heart, I questioned if I should let go—who even cares? I was staring at the edge, ready to leave this godforsaken world, Thought maybe peace could come if I just let it all unfurl. But then I heard footsteps behind me, slow and unsure, I turned to see her—my wife, the one I couldn't ignore. She stood at the rooftop door, eyes full of regret, I hadn’t seen her in months, the one I couldn’t forget. (Bridge) “I never meant to leave you,” she said, voice trembling and frail, “I was lost, I was broken, I know I had failed.” But inside I was burning, a fire too hot to tame, Her leaving me felt like a betrayal I couldn’t explain. (Outro) I walked right past her, no words, no glance, My anger too thick, my heart in a trance. But I realized, in the anger, something sparked inside, A purpose I didn’t know I needed, a reason to survive. Her return wasn’t a sign of the past that I’d known, it was proof of a chance for a future, a way to find my own. A chance to rebuild, to heal from the months gone by, To rise from the ashes, with hope in my eyes. Maybe it’s not just about the love we once had, It’s about the life I could build, and the family I could have.
15 Comments
🖤 Axel 🖤 13w ago
🖤🥀🖤
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
💔🥹
♏M.L.O.K 13w ago
Nádherná píseň ❤️🔥🙏
♏M.L.O.K 13w ago
Nádherný, smutný, život nás pořád školí....
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
Life sure does teach, pain is hard but filling that hole definitely helps. 💕
OrangeCrooner4828 13w ago
❤️
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
💖✨
CrazySparkles 13w ago
😟❤️
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
💔🥹💖
G Chill 13w ago
heartfelt and so well written! respect! 🙏
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
Thank you! the praise means alot. 🥰
Mr.lord 13w ago
Perfect 👏
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
Thanks a lot, took a lot of time to get right, but it sure was worth it
NATURAL STUPIDITY 10w ago
I like the vibe
The Invisible Storm 10w ago
Glad to hear that! Bluegrass sure does work so well with this piece. 🎶👌
OrangeAcidBass6286 12w ago
How is this done? Can you teach me?
The Invisible Storm 12w ago
If you mean the music instrumentals, All I did was generate with these tags used the lyrics I created and used the recreate section or extend feature, just trial and error til it sounds right.
Clarence kearschner 13w ago
really good song 👍
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
Thanks, i sure put my soul into the lyrics and took my time to make the generated song amazing
MitchieBabes2411 13w ago
Mid-west country pop! Miley Cyrus be jelly of this potential banger~
The Invisible Storm 13w ago
My talent should make many modern popular artists scared, Boo!!
Shyky - Los Angeles. 7w ago
Beautiful 🪬
The Invisible Storm 7w ago
✨💗
Ron DesJarlais 8w ago
It was heartfelt. I just lost mt son 26 days ago. Writing songs in his honor has be very therapeutic for me.
The Invisible Storm 8w ago
I'm glad you've found a nice way to handle the loss of your son. It means a lot that my song connected with you, and I truly hope you're able to find as much peace and comfort as possible moving forward. 💕
Ia 11w ago
Wonderful 😊. Can you please tell me, whether it's possible to save the song, I mean to download it on my phone.
The Invisible Storm 10w ago
You would have to record it with some type of software as I do that sometimes on my computer but there's probably a background app for phone's that could do that too.
Joanna5141319 11w ago
🫶💓💕💕
The Invisible Storm 11w ago
💖✨🎶