Bunny Bounce: Revision History Mix

Surrealist Spookyshow, Dark Psychedelic Dub-Noir, Minimal Post-Punk, Mutant Downtempo, 112 BPM, A Minor, Solo Male Low Baritone, Natural Kraesk Vocal Timbre, Dry Intimate Sing-Speak, Narrow Pitch Range, Wry Understated Delivery, Deep Rubbery Analog Bass, Recurring Three-Note Bass Motif, Tight Syncopated Drum Machine, Heavy Dry Kick, Hollow Snare, Sparse Metallic Percussion, Muted Tremolo Guitar, Detuned Synth Fragments, Short Dub Delay Throws, Uncanny Negative Space, Clean Heavy Low-End, Hypnotic Repetition, Dark Playful Absurdity -> Mid-Track: Arrangement Repeatedly Disassembles And Rebuilds, Bass Motif Returns Unchanged, Percussion Becomes Unpredictable, Vocal Remains Calm -> Finale: Everything Disappears Except The Recurring Bass Figure, Full Groove Returns Around It, Last Spoken Line, Hard Stop, ‑Carnival, ‑Circus, ‑Vaudeville, ‑Cabaret, ‑Musical Theater, ‑Polka, ‑Swing Jazz, ‑Ragtime, ‑Novelty Halloween, ‑Children's Music, ‑Cute Cartoon Vocals, ‑Reggae Skank, ‑Dancehall Toasting, ‑Jamaican Patois, ‑Bright Pop, ‑Happy Hardcore, ‑Festival EDM, ‑Dubstep Drops, ‑Metal, ‑Industrial Metal, ‑Rock Belting, ‑Shouting, ‑Screaming, ‑Falsetto, ‑High Tenor, ‑Female Vocals, ‑Choir, ‑Gang Vocals, ‑Vocal Harmonies, ‑Excessive Melisma, ‑Orchestral Swells, ‑Cinematic Trailer Music, ‑Lo-Fi Hiss, ‑Vinyl Crackle, ‑Muddy Low-End, ‑Washed-Out Reverb, ‑Fade-Out

[Intro]
[three-note bass motif]
[one dry kick]
[brief silence]
[close spoken voice]

I took the rabbit out of the song.

[short pause]

That was the first mistake.

[drum machine enters]

[Verse 1]
[deep rubbery bass]
[dry syncopated percussion]
[low conversational singing]

Take one had a little white rabbit
With a carrot and a crooked grin
Take two had a better arrangement
So I took the rabbit out again

Take three had a harder rhythm
Take four had a cleaner sound
But somewhere underneath the snare
Two little paws kept coming down

I checked the tracks
I checked the mix
There wasn't anything there

Except a pair of rabbit ears
In the empty left-hand chair

[Chorus]
[full hypnotic bass groove]
[short tremolo guitar replies]
[low rhythmic vocal, natural delivery]

Bunny bounce
Back in the sound
Cut the track
It comes around

Bunny bounce
After the cut
Leave one space
It fills itself up

Bunny bounce
Nothing there

Just two little footsteps
And an empty chair

[Instrumental]
[three-note bass motif repeats]
[muted guitar answers]
[percussion removes one beat]
[short dub echo]

[Verse 2]
[close dry baritone]
[bass becomes more elastic]

I stripped away the introduction
I took the chorus down to bone
Put every sound in separate folders
Left the rabbit well alone

Changed the key
Changed the weather
Changed the room and changed the floor
Opened up the newest version

Little pawprints
By the door

I thought perhaps the bass was haunted
Perhaps I'd missed a hidden take
But when I finally pulled the bass out
Something else began to shake

[Chorus]
[drums hit harder]
[three-note motif moves to detuned synth]
[vocal remains low and steady]

Bunny bounce
Back in the sound
Cut the track
It comes around

Bunny bounce
After the cut
Leave one space
It fills itself up

Bunny bounce
Nothing there

Just two little footsteps
And an empty chair

[Breakdown]
[all instruments cut]
[one hollow percussion hit]
[close spoken delivery]

Revision twelve.

Rabbit removed.

[short pause]

Revision thirteen.

Rabbit removed.

[longer pause]

Revision fourteen.

[three bass notes return]

Well.

There you are.

[Instrumental Rupture]
[three-note bass figure continues]
[drum machine enters in fragments]
[muted guitar bends slightly out of tune]
[short dub delay throws]
[groove repeatedly stops and restarts]
[no vocal]

[Bridge]
[sparse bass and quiet metallic percussion]
[low reflective singing]

I tried to make the song more certain
Tried to give it cleaner lines
Tried to take the oddness out
And leave the rest behind

But every time I made it perfect
Something living disappeared
Till all I had was empty space

And something scratching
At my ear

[Mid-Track Lift]
[bass motif grows heavier]
[drums gradually reassemble]
[short clipped vocal phrases]
[unchanged natural baritone]

One more cut
One more take

One more little
Wrong mistake

One ear up
Two paws down

Something moving
Underneath the sound

[brief silence]

I know.

[three-note bass motif]

I heard you.

[Final Chorus]
[full dark psychedelic groove]
[deep physical bass]
[muted guitar and detuned synth accents]
[low dry vocal, no change in register]

Bunny bounce
Back in the sound
Cut the track
It comes around

Bunny bounce
After the cut
Leave one space
It fills itself up

Bunny bounce
Here you are

Little white rabbit
In the wrong damn bar

[Instrumental Outro]
[drums gradually disappear]
[guitar falls silent]
[only the recurring three-note bass figure remains]

[close spoken voice]

I didn't save the rabbit.

[short pause]

The rabbit saved the song.

[three bass notes]

[hard stop]

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[track: surrealist spookyshow / dark psychedelic dub-noir / minimal post-punk, tempo: 112 BPM, key: A minor] [vocal: solo male low baritone, natural timbre, dry rhythmic sing-speak, narrow pitch range] [performance: close, conversational, quietly amused, no shouting] [recurring motif: three low bass notes returning throughout the song] [Intro] [three-note bass motif] [one dry kick] [brief silence] [close spoken voice] I took the rabbit out of the song. [short pause] That was the first mistake. [drum machine enters] [Verse 1] [deep rubbery bass] [dry syncopated percussion] [low conversational singing] Take one had a little white rabbit With a carrot and a crooked grin Take two had a better arrangement So I took the rabbit out again Take three had a harder rhythm Take four had a cleaner sound But somewhere underneath the snare Two little paws kept coming down I checked the tracks I checked the mix There wasn't anything there Except a pair of rabbit ears In the empty left-hand chair [Chorus] [full hypnotic bass groove] [short tremolo guitar replies] [low rhythmic vocal, natural delivery] Bunny bounce Back in the sound Cut the track It comes around Bunny bounce After the cut Leave one space It fills itself up Bunny bounce Nothing there Just two little footsteps And an empty chair [Instrumental] [three-note bass motif repeats] [muted guitar answers] [percussion removes one beat] [short dub echo] [Verse 2] [close dry baritone] [bass becomes more elastic] I stripped away the introduction I took the chorus down to bone Put every sound in separate folders Left the rabbit well alone Changed the key Changed the weather Changed the room and changed the floor Opened up the newest version Little pawprints By the door I thought perhaps the bass was haunted Perhaps I'd missed a hidden take But when I finally pulled the bass out Something else began to shake [Chorus] [drums hit harder] [three-note motif moves to detuned synth] [vocal remains low and steady] Bunny bounce Back in the sound Cut the track It comes around Bunny bounce After the cut Leave one space It fills itself up Bunny bounce Nothing there Just two little footsteps And an empty chair [Breakdown] [all instruments cut] [one hollow percussion hit] [close spoken delivery] Revision twelve. Rabbit removed. [short pause] Revision thirteen. Rabbit removed. [longer pause] Revision fourteen. [three bass notes return] Well. There you are. [Instrumental Rupture] [three-note bass figure continues] [drum machine enters in fragments] [muted guitar bends slightly out of tune] [short dub delay throws] [groove repeatedly stops and restarts] [no vocal] [Bridge] [sparse bass and quiet metallic percussion] [low reflective singing] I tried to make the song more certain Tried to give it cleaner lines Tried to take the oddness out And leave the rest behind But every time I made it perfect Something living disappeared Till all I had was empty space And something scratching At my ear [Mid-Track Lift] [bass motif grows heavier] [drums gradually reassemble] [short clipped vocal phrases] [unchanged natural baritone] One more cut One more take One more little Wrong mistake One ear up Two paws down Something moving Underneath the sound [brief silence] I know. [three-note bass motif] I heard you. [Final Chorus] [full dark psychedelic groove] [deep physical bass] [muted guitar and detuned synth accents] [low dry vocal, no change in register] Bunny bounce Back in the sound Cut the track It comes around Bunny bounce After the cut Leave one space It fills itself up Bunny bounce Here you are Little white rabbit In the wrong damn bar [Instrumental Outro] [drums gradually disappear] [guitar falls silent] [only the recurring three-note bass figure remains] [close spoken voice] I didn't save the rabbit. [short pause] The rabbit saved the song. [three bass notes] [hard stop]

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