
Forced Display #SUNOVISION 2025
This track is an English version of my best work recently, ❌https://suno.com/song/bea798ab-fbf9-4fa6-9c56-3af32f39595e?sh=hZP2G1Ej5SM1wtCM,❌ which unfortunately went unnoticed by Suno's algorithms😒. I tried to make the English version as close to the original as possible, while avoiding a direct and literal translation of the text. My goal was to convey the style and atmosphere of the original track... to the best of my ability with my current understanding of the English language. I hope you enjoy both versions, and... and... and I welcome your feedback. I'm always open to it.😈😈😈 🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶 [Verse 1] Bare, I long to be... (long...) Name and flesh undone... (undone...) Where my soul has burned away... (burned...) Leaving ash of memories, just stray... (stray...) [Verse 2] Reality bites deep... (deep...) Like a beast, it's hungry creep... (creep...) Choking on my throat's despair... (despair...) My cry, a helpless prayer... (prayer...) [Chorus] I refuse!!! (fuse!) I'm bound!!! (bound!) I break away!!!!!! (break!) Leave me here!! (here!) Let me fade away!!!!!! (fade!) Soul, a shattered glass! (glass!) Body, iron sway! (sway!) Who am I??? (I?) Where am I? (I?) When will I find my day? (day?) [Verse 3] Smiles, a painted lie... (lie...) Masks at a masquerade, so high... (high...) Fire beneath the cloak's deceit... (deceit...) Burning all to bitter heat... (heat...) My heart, a fading scroll... (scroll...) Eyes, where broken dreams unroll... (unroll...) Shadows dance oblivion's sway... (sway...) Am I living... (living...) Or just a forced display... (display...) An echo in this endless gray... (gray...) [Chorus] I refuse!!! (fuse!) I'm bound!!! (bound!) I break away!!!!!! (break!) Leave me here!! (here!) Let me fade away!!!!!! (fade!) Soul, a shattered glass! (glass!) Body, iron sway! (sway!) Who am I??? (I?) Where am I? (I?) When will I find my day? (day?) [Bridge] Whispers... (whispers...) Void's embrace... (embrace...) Strike... (strike...) A frozen tear's trace... (trace...) Sky, a wall so high... (high...) All is lost, I sigh... (sigh...) [Chorus] I refuse!!! (fuse!) I'm bound!!! (bound!) I break away!!!!!! (break!) Leave me here!! (here!) Let me fade away!!!!!! (fade!) Soul, a shattered glass! (glass!) Body, iron sway! (sway!) Who am I??? (I?) Where am I? (I?) When will I find my day? (day?) [Chorus] I refuse!!! (fuse!) I'm bound!!! (bound!) I break away!!!!!! (break!) Leave me here!! (here!) Let me fade away!!!!!! (fade!) Soul, a shattered glass! (glass!) Body, iron sway! (sway!) Who am I??? (I?) Where am I? (I?) When will I find my day? (day?)
5 Comments
Nepenthe ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜 5d ago
The first thing that draws me in here is the whispered quality of the voice in the verse and then the powerful, belting that occurs in the chorus! I can appreciate the wording so much in the chorus and then also as it moves into the third verse. Thank you so much for submitting this song to Sunovision 2025! <3
San1Project & Suno 4w ago
Концептуально і потужно. Приємний післясмак від прослуховування. Дякую.
Recnac 4w ago
Дякую за коментар. Рад, что понравилось)
♥️ Athena ♥️ 4w ago
♥️💯
Recnac 4w ago
Thx=))) 🤗🤗🤗
AIRockComposer 4w ago
Мені цей стиль більше подобається ніж оригінал (ну це справа смаку). PS: Додам в playlist вартує декількох переслуховувань :).
Recnac 4w ago
Мені теж, але в оригіналі такий стиль не зайшов, українська має більш насичену мелодійність тож... як вийшло. Але саме оригінал "торкає" більше
¥Θ₦ÌŦ, Í$ŖΓΔΞĹ🤍 4w ago
This song is just perfect!!! The words, the music and the voice all together convey the feeling of the song - "Who am I??? What am I??? When will I find my day???" This song moved me. Well done. And by the way, the picture also adds to it. Perfect🤍🤍🤍
Recnac 4w ago
thx you🤗