“RAVENS, DOVES & THE HOOK”

“RAVENS, DOVES & THE HOOK” — SUNO READY [INTRO – slow build / distant drums / sub-bass rumble] Sound check. Bass up. Harmony loaded. Sick-ass beats in the veins of the street. Thanksgivingmore — open the doors. Time to rhyme for the ones we pushed away before. Faces lit. House of cards, kings and queens sit. New seductions make the spine lift. Aces thrown — Elan Moda Productions — Welcome to your new addictions. I was far, wheels in the sky adjusting, Angels with wings dipped in black ink rusting. [VERSE 1] Alone on my pirate ship, paddling fate, Giving my hours to the stars, letting waves narrate. Quiet ocean loud, humble but proud — This song? I finish it or drown. Love. Cherish. Respect — vow in the sound. Mind twisted, tight-fisted, But never once did I ch-ch-cheat or steal or lie — My name stays listed. Tears splash across the deck, Ghost of the Captain reaching for my neck. Dark hook glowing — shadow outline. He drags me to the plank like it’s execution time. But then — A light cracks open inside my mind: “I control this dream. He’s dead — not I.” Ship flips. Tides whip. His hook rips loose — He slings off the side screaming truth. Sharks circle — hungry, proud — I yell, “Release the sharks!” Ocean roars loud. Shelly the shark already took the head… Fine. Song still goes ahead. Hip-hip-hooray — blood drifting in the bay. He sinks with sin, where nightmares stay. [PRE-CHORUS] Chained, untamed, his screams dissolve, Bubbles rise — no one to resolve. One bubble pops through the fog that night: “Why… Shmee… help me Shmeee…” fading out of sight. Parrot on deck laughs: “Finally gone.” Sharks grind him into nothing before dawn. Hook — a warning of the Devil’s tone, Powerful, intense, nonsense when he’s gone. [CHORUS – cinematic / seductive / dark] Crash — ship hits sand where angels sing. A voice calls out: “Come follow me.” A woman in glow, ravens above, Doves circling like guardians of love. I kneel — she says, “Rise, rise my king.” Moon splashes silver across everything. Aces. Clubs. Diamonds returned. Spades like wings dipped black and burned. All dreams bending, truth renewing — My queen staring through me, undoing. [VERSE 2 – hard / rap / no filler] Ravens drop ink on my cloak — Clothes dry, heart stokes, “Is this real?” No tricks, no jokes. Doves swirl around her form — Beauty reborn, my calm in the storm. Down on my knees again — She lifts my chin, breath on skin: “Come with me…” (echo kiss drifting in.) Fear fades. Rush invades. Death inevitable — but tonight we live unafraid. Wind stops. Anchor drops. Trance beats sync with Wonderland clocks. T-t-t-t-tik—DING. “That was a long don—key.” Whatever — continue the story. Hawaiian-lit hut forms around us two, Candles flare — shadows bloom. Ravens and doves whisper: “I’m here for you.” [BRIDGE – sensual / dark fantasy] Bed falls like a rabbit hole spinning, Bodies press — no losing, only winning. Alice sponsoring the sinning. Heaven watching. Music stopping. Mid-air freeze — Life is fair when love drops to its knees. Slow motion. Fast as can be. Speeding past slow like we break gravity. Knocked down, back up — angels throw light. No weed needed, just the night. Wake fuzzy-eyed on a couch — My place. My grace. But then — a tap behind… A whisper: “I love you.” That’s when you hold her and let hearts align. [RAP BREAKDOWN – darker, cleaner, harder] Raven. Dove. Two guardians of nightmare and love. Cheshire cat tries to roar like wolf or tiger — Fails miserably — but we ride the fire. Pause the song. Song plays the pause. Cat claws out, correcting flaws. Door slams — BOOM BOOM — room shakes. He drives off screaming as the night awakes. Her voice echoes: “More… more… MORE.” Cat answers with one last roar. [ENDING] Night fades. Hearts blaze. Fantasy maze turns into morning haze. That’s all you jokes — But the music still smokes. Elan Moda Productions — We end where the dream provokes. Welcome, to your new seductions... Th-th-that’s all… for now.