— ⌀ — 🌬🕯🌌 Drew Everlong – "Hira-Sha’kandru" 🌌🕯🌬 Non-religious Kandri ritual – Spirit in the Breath-Song This is my personal spiritual song in Kandri, my constructed ritual language. "Hira-Sha’kandru" means “spirit in the breath-song”: a confession about my life, the wounds I carry, the bonds I cherish, and the way I keep breathing and creating in a world that isn’t always kind. No gods, no dogma—just breath, memory, music, and the people I love. 💬 What is Kandri? Kandri is a real language I’ve been building over time. Every word in the lyrics has a defined meaning in a written lexicon: breath, memory, lineage, spirit, bond, grief, hope, belief, world, life, last breath, and more. The current Kandri lexicon (v1.1) contains over 100 defined entries, organised into foundations (breath, memory, path, inner truth), emotions, connection/relationships, spiritual movement, nature imagery, internal states, pronouns and song terms. It’s breath-based, concept-first, and designed specifically for ritual-style songs about inner life and quiet resilience. This isn’t random syllables or glossolalia, but a consistent system you could actually learn and reuse. 🎶 Example – Chorus (Kandri → English) Kandri: shae thaera m’thaa va vael. sha ra-mii. sha raan, elu na elu. shae oru, thraa-mii raan. shae ren-thaa sha’o aer-thum, mura lun, kora nua. vael luntra: “sha-raan… sha-raan…” English meaning: I hold my inner truth as my belief within this world. Breath is clarity-light for me. If breath moves, I rise and step again. If I listen in the silence, my memories light up and lift me. I stand centered in my own ground, with shame echoing but courage still new and alive. The world whispers back: “Breathe and rise… breathe and rise…” 🎧 Sound & Framework This track uses the **Kandri Ritual Tier 2 Framework**, designed for: ° Breath-led Kandri vocals, no Earth language ° Soft tribal drums, drones, forest-cathedral reverb ° Intimate confession growing into quiet, unresolved hope 📝 English sense-translation (short) The song begins with me admitting my spirit isn’t calm, but my inner light is still an ember that refuses to die. I remember my life as a line of memories and burdens that could have been chains, yet I choose to treat them as roots that keep me standing. I call myself out as tangled and imperfect, full of doubt and broken peace, but still learning to center around my own truth. In the chorus I state my belief: breath is my clarity. If I can breathe and listen, I can rise again, even when my courage is small and my shame still shakes. I don’t believe in gods or altars; I only kneel to the moments that demand painful growth and to the memories that hurt because they mattered. Later I say that my spirit travels with the breath-song—my creations are proof that I’m still here, still resilient, even when friends remain only as echoes. Life is a path through a harsh world; some days I sink, some days I rise, but the grounding pulse in me holds. When my last breath comes, I want my spirit to remain as a small ember in the people I’ve touched, and my memories to shine on in the world after me. This is my belief: simple, human, carried in breath and given to the world as song. 🌿 Kandri Ritual Set 🌿 These four songs form the spiritual spine of Kandri: • "Shaelaun-Kandri" – birth & lineage • "Naxorelda: The Sixteenth" – confession & identity • "Kandrit’el Zuintra" – praise & chosen bonds • "Veshel Shei’Luntra" – unresolved grief that still glows 🎼 Full Kandri playlist: https://suno.com/playlist/0155e644-3ae4-49d5-85c4-0fe43f330134 Kandri Lexicon v1.1: https://www.patreon.com/posts/kandri-lexicon-1-144830047 🌟 Prompt Guide & Visual Pack (Tier 2): https://www.patreon.com/c/dreweverlong/ ✨ More Everlong universes: Patreon → https://www.patreon.com/c/dreweverlong/ YouTube → https://www.youtube.com/@DrewEverlong — ⌀ — [Intro – sha-Preludra] haa… "shae hira" laen nu, solun va vael. mii-shae shelun, kelra ren-thaa. sha… sha… "mii-shae na thraa-mii"(mii… thraa…) [Verse 1 – thraa alun] "thraa alun" ri un… thraa-lin ri vethra, thun sha’o shae. "draa’ven na dela"(draa’ven… dela…), raev-ri mii. "thraa sha-zuin" luntra va aer-thum, vethra sha’o "shae"(shae…) [Verse 2 – shae mira-thun] "shae lun-shae"(lun… shae…), mira-thun o m’thaa. laen na rasha, kethi va kelra. noor ver-len, laen "relun"(relun…) shae nu full ren-thaa, "shae ren-thaa mii-thraa"(mii… thraa…) [Chorus – thaera m’thaa] "shae thaera m’thaa" va vael. "sha ra-mii"(sha… ra-mii…) "sha raan"(raan…), elu na elu shae oru, "thraa-mii raan"(thraa… raan…) "shae ren-thaa" sha’o aer-thum, mura lun, "kora nua"(kora… nua…) vael luntra: "sha-raan… sha-raan…" [Bridge – thaera sha’o m’thaa] "shae thaera sha’o m’thaa", nu ri kael. shae ha-sha raa toh "vera-thun na thraa"(vera… thun… thraa…), thraa vera, "mii-thraa hira"(mii… hira…) "dusha-morin"(dusha… morin…), oru-saer sha’o shae, "mii-shae kelra"(kelra…) in elu na elu [Chorus 2 – hira va sha-kandru] "hira shae" va "sha-kandru" "kandru thaera-sung"(kandru…), "kandri hira-voice"(hira… voice…) solun dusha, "mii-shae hira-shaen"(mii… hira…) "shae kelra"(kelra…), shae ei-kandru, sha’o vethra na sael, "lun-muthra saeltra"(lun… saeltra…) va shae. [Final Chorus – alun & sha-ruu] "alun shei vael"(alun… shei…)— elu na elu dorin na raan, aer-thum heldra shae. "sha-ruu" toh shae(sha… ruu…), "hira shae shelun"(shelun…) va saeltra, "thraa-mii sorin"(thraa… sorin…) va vael-ri shae. [Outro – sha-Endingra] haa… "shae thaera": laen, "alun-shae"(alun… shae…), "hira sha’o sha"(hira… sha…), "kandru va vael"(kandru… vael…)
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