✍️✍️This is an English version of my recent song "Белый лист" that I decided to make cause I already did the English lyrics, so don't waste the good, yeah? I wanted to make something completely different in sound, so I was trying bagpipes, Celtic elements, Punk-Rock, even vocaloid Hatsune Miku, in turn. And there was something I didn't like about each of them, so then I merged the concepts😅. But Suno fought me every step of the way. Vocaloids, bagpipes... even the song structure! So it's not Miku voice at all (at least she sometimes flashes in backing vocal); the vocaloid really wants to become human ("Vocaloid: Become human" ha-ha); bagpipes turn into piano; bridge turns into a strange verses. In short, it was a wild ride, so the lyrics changed a little bit... again... as if they didn't have enough changes because of the specifics of the versified rhythmic translation, but they also changed due to Suno's "I know better". It's some kind of the Broken Telephone game😅. But I think it turned out alright! Hope you enjoy it. The original song: https://suno.com/song/ccfaf1ed-a824-4842-9862-0e427d247fce ✍️✍️ ====================== [Intense bagpipes rock intro] [Verse 1] Blank page is mocking me because I am lost... In its dried-up riverbed. (ri ri riverbed) Trying to build a stream of thoughts But hitting pause Is caused by loud silence instead! (И, и, и, Instead) [Verse 2] The crowded words are in my head And they're mad: There is no place for them on the sheet. (Oah oah on the sheet) I want to chain them up and send To stain it black, I need to drown them all in mental ink. (Me me mental ink) [Chorus 1] This cruel blank page looks into my soul, I just can't ignore! But I can stand against it’s icy stare, I'll send it back with equal dare, I swear... But maybe I'm not so brave and cruel, though, And can't send my crew Of misplaced thoughts to this snow-white fancy lalaland... Maybe I should not spray the ink poison on it from my head... [Short interlude] [Verse 3] Knitted my brows, writing again But in my brain Just cannot knit words into a line. (la la line) I see the night through dreamin lane, But in the veins My perfect song still can't get loud. (La la loud.) [Verse 4] There are mixed colors in the dark And my heart... Is filled with a pulsating emptiness. (E e e emptiness) And the lines that I scrawled somehow... They look down, Awaiting execution of themselves. (O, o, o, o) [Chorus 2] This cruel blank page looks into my soul, I just can't ignore! But I can stand against it’s icy stare, I'll send it back with equal dare, I swear... I will be so brave, I will be so cruel, I'll send all of my misplaced thoughts to that snow-white lalaland... And the white sheet will beg to stop that mess hail from my head... [Short interlude] [Verse] Blank page, I want to write something. Mess in my head wants to become the ink blob. Even if I don't wanna pollute your white sheet. It wanna fall on your field, make a stand-out spot. (Spa spa spot.) [Build-up verse] You pray: "No, don't tread on me in any way!" But the mess in my head wants to go on your stage. All the drawings, thoughts, and every stupid phrase, Like a nails on the glass, they wants to walk along that page... (That stupid snow-white page!) [Bagpipes interlude] I am writing! (Writing...) I am writing! (Writing...) I am writing! (Writing...) I am writing! (Writing...) Is Completed! [Pause] [Outro] So something seems to have been written, I'm glad that words finally lined. I got my soul in the right frame... of mind... (in the right frame of my mind...) But ink-stained sheet thinks I am a villain. It wants me to get lost in the dark... And from its ink grave tries to leave me With a bleeding scarlet pay...per cut... [Bagpipes and piano outro] [End]

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Lungcorf

Lungcorf 5w ago

This voice's a deal breaker :/ What is good here, tho, is the effort you've put into your lyrics, horseing around with them, it's just as good as the Russian version

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 5w ago

Yep, cause it's boring to just do the same thing, but in English. It needs some changes)

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AriteAL

AriteAL 5w ago

Antonio_Troyanov⚡, your experimental spirit truly exploded here—it was incredibly fun! Bagpipes, punk rock, and a Vocaloid trying to become human merged so cleverly, it felt like musical alchemy. Loved how creatively you expressed the battle with the blank page🌱✨

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DownY

DownY 5w ago

Excellent, this mix of Miku voice and Irish punk !!
I really like it ! 💜
And I totally understand that urge to want to write, but nothing wants to come out or not the way we want.

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 5w ago

Thanks! I've been wanting to do something with Miku's voice for quite some time. Since I often met generation with her, but somehow did not find suitable song for her, but this lyrics is quite in her spirit, I think) And bagpipes and kinda Irish punk were very much inspired by your "MathémaVie", that song was really a fire)

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AlexanderSergeevich05

AlexanderSergeevich05 5w ago

Голос ребёнка хех)

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JUSTJOSH

JUSTJOSH 5w ago

Cool!

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samritha

samritha 5w ago

please check my songs

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Ambidexta

Ambidexta 3w ago

I am so used to Japanese Miku voice 😂 English sounds all new

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 3w ago

I listened Miku's English songs and, well, that's not exactly Miku's voice came out here, but let's assume that she's in transition age😅

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SV

SV 3w ago

' ')b

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RB/Z(Rabbit_Baron/Zen)

RB/Z(Rabbit_Baron/Zen) 4w ago

Ohhh, you're also a Vocaloid🩷I'm so happy that there are more songs in my favorite style✨I like the atmosphere that can only be created with a mechanical voice✨The fast-paced and emotional lyrics are depicted in contrast with black and white, it's really excellent🙌

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 3w ago

That was my first vocaloid song, wanted to do some experiments) Don't know, wanna make some more or not. This time Suno didn't like vocaloid, wanted to make it human. That experience was not so fun😅

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Reis&Almirantes ⚓⚓⚓

Reis&Almirantes ⚓⚓⚓ 5w ago

That was a great track! nice job

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 5w ago

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it)

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🎼𝗡𝗘𝗩𝗘𝗥𝗖𝗢𝗠𝗘𝗕𝗔𝗖𝗞♖𝗡𝗖

🎼𝗡𝗘𝗩𝗘𝗥𝗖𝗢𝗠𝗘𝗕𝗔𝗖𝗞♖𝗡𝗖 3w ago

Да, мне нравится то, что получилось... А эти танцы с бубнами и непредсказуемость результата мне знакомы... Наверное профессионал сошёл бы с ума и довольно быстро - надо иметь любовь к экспериментам и открытость к любому результату, чтоб писать песни на Суно, ахах! С удовольствием послушал эту вещь, спасибо! Сам недавно экспериментировал с вокалоидом, но слишком механический голос не подошел для тематики... Но значит еще все впереди!

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 3w ago

Да, вокалоиду больше подходит что-то японское, по типу J-pop и lo-fi, или нечто под их инструменты, такие как shamisen и shakuhachi, с ними у Суно под вокалоид проблем будто и не возникает, человеком не делает и звучит подходяще. Я сам хотел сделать Мику под них но, как всё уже было готово к публикации, мне подумалось, что звучит как-то слишком скучно, нет изюминки какой-то. Так что я тогда пошёл страдать дальше😅 Считаю, что не прогадал) ну, будет интересно услышать от тебя что-то с вокалоидом)

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Lungcorf

Lungcorf 5w ago

please check my songs

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 5w ago

Haha😁 you know I've done it and I'm still doing it for a long time.)

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