[INTRO – 8 bars] [VERSE 1 – Whispered, close-mic, dry at first] Your pulse is a slow drum beneath porcelain skin, Calling me closer than prayer. My lips already tasting the hymn That spills from your throat like midnight wine. (Synth waves fade in, like smoke. Light delay on “wine”.) [PRE-CHORUS – Breathier, reverb swells] I don’t want your body… I want the red river that sings inside it— The one that rises when my shadow leans in, When my breath ghosts the hollow of your collarbone… And every heartbeat answers yes. (Bass deepens. Add soft finger-snap or rim-shot on “yes”.) [CHORUS – Let me drink the silence between your moans, The way you arch like a cathedral at dawn. Light bleeding through stained-glass ribs. Your neck is scripture— I read it with fangs that never break the skin, Only trace the promise: Here… eternity begins. (Full synth pad swell. Choir: “eternity… eternity…” under main vocal. Delay on “begins” trails into next bar.) [VERSE 2 – Slightly more intimate, add vinyl hiss] I am the ache that pools low in your belly, The velvet storm that licks your spine awake. No rush, no fall— Just the slow unraveling of centuries In the space between one breath… and the next. (Add subtle glitch on “centuries” – like a heartbeat skip.) [CHORUS – Bigger, choir louder, bass throbs] Let me drink the silence between your moans, The way you arch like a cathedral at dawn. Light bleeding through stained-glass ribs. Your neck is scripture— I read it with fangs that never break the skin, Only trace the promise: Here… eternity begins. [BRIDGE – Your blood is not food… It is the ocean I drown in willingly. Wave after wave of salt and starlight, Carrying me deeper… into the temple of you. (Slowly layer in distant choir: “stay open… stay open…”) [FINAL CHORUS – Full production, vocals doubled, sensual ad-libs] Stay open, my psalm— Let the night pour through your veins Until we are both trembling altars, Until the only word left is… More. (Hold “more” with heavy delay, choir swells, fade into heartbeat bass.) [OUTRO – 8 bars] (Heartbeat bass slows to 70 BPM. Choir fades. Last whisper: “more…” echoing into silence.) 🌿🌸🌿 All rights reserved © Judy Gat 𝓟𝓱𝓸𝓮𝓷𝓲𝔁🦋 Remixes allowed only with name credit 🌿🌸🌿
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