The Viper Succeeds

Make the voices a bit more professional and not so weak towards the top, And the song could start off with and an off key just slightly of that song they play during Christmas when Santa is sneaking but it’s toning up and pretty quickly modulates into a nice sounding key and they take over from there, It needs to be poppy enough to be cool but folly enough to be legit and should have some kind of difficult rhythmic harmony and key and structure that literally makes people stop in their tracks because it sounds so interesting and extremely difficult like that cup song but should have elements that are the ones like songs that have this sound or this are always hits, I want them to start off slightly being like damn I think I already don’t like ///is that the song from Christmas turning their head but hearing it modulate like a dog turns its head but the start is off so they can’t tell right away and maybe the lead and the secondary of backgrounds are like, Just slightly lagging

[Verse 1] One day I will get out of here Strings plucked one sec, don’t let them see the tear Just one… just one more breath I can’t remember when this shit was fun Feels like I’m stuck in a rut again Wrapped up tight like queen of the slaughter pen [Pre-Chorus] I scroll, I pace I laugh in the wrong place Tell every mirror “I swear I’m fine” But my hands shake over cold plates Dreams going stale on the sidelines [Chorus] If you really wanna know you have got to get out or you’ll never even see what this hurt is about Tear the tape from your mouth step out of that doubt If you really wanna know you have got to get out [Verse 2] I hate this I want carbs just peanut butter Spoon in the jar like I’m hiding undercover Talking to the ceiling like it’s some kind of lover Every plan I make I manage to smother [Pre-Chorus] But there’s a key tucked under the tongue A little “what if” tapping like a drum A list on the fridge that I never start A door in the dark shaped like my heart [Chorus] If you really wanna know you have got to get out or you’ll never even see what this cage is about Tear the tape from your mouth step into that shout If you really wanna know you have got to get out [Bridge] What if I walk before I feel ready What if my voice comes out too heavy What if I crack right there in the sun What if that’s the moment I finally run (oh) [Chorus] If you really wanna know you have got to get out or you’ll live in every fear that you’re singing about Shake the dust from your name turn it inside out If you really wanna know you have got to get out If I really wanna know I have got to get out

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