Intro] [PERFORMANCE: Very slow, breath-held, dark touch, let silence speak] [ARRANGEMENT: Low-register rolled tones, wide spacing, long ring] [HARMONY: i(add9)–ivm9–♭VImaj7–V(sus♭9)] [Verse 1] [PERFORMANCE: Intimate, patient, soft but ominous, controlled rubato] [ARRANGEMENT: Broken chord support, low resonance, sparse upper answers] [HARMONY: i–♭VI–iv–V–i] cup-ring moon / on the unslept bed, half-turned chair / and the word unsaid, near-touch hand / in the fading lamp, love goes thin in the evening damp. [Pre-Chorus 1] [PERFORMANCE: Narrower, tenser, whispered insistence] [ARRANGEMENT: Slightly higher register, closer voicings, subtle tremolo] [HARMONY: vi–iiø–V(sus)–i] not by knife. by nearly. not by wound. by merely. [Chorus] [PERFORMANCE: Dramatic but not loud, solemn incantation] [ARRANGEMENT: Fuller voicings, wider rolls, stronger low-note punctuations] [HARMONY: i–♭VI–iv–V–i] no rage. no wreck. no red right hand. just the hush-hush crush of the in-between. just “fine,” just “next,” just “who gives a damn.” love goes low while the bright goes dim— in the hush / in the blurring bland, the artist dust / worked by mild dead hands. [Verse 2] [PERFORMANCE: Colder tone, firmer articulation, measured sorrow] [ARRANGEMENT: Mid-low ostinato fragments, sparse upper punctuations] [HARMONY: i–♭VII–♭VI–V(sus)–i] white-lit hum / and the polished plan, neat yes yes / of the careful man, paper ghost / where the bold should stand, best blood waits with an empty hand. [Pre-Chorus 2] [PERFORMANCE: Clipped, tense, inward pressure] [ARRANGEMENT: Tighter middle register, repeated rolled intervals] [HARMONY: iiø–V(alt) over pedal i] not by theft. by filing. not by blow. by smiling. [Chorus] [PERFORMANCE: Same gravity, slightly more urgency] [ARRANGEMENT: Fuller resonance, stronger bass emphasis] [HARMONY: i–♭VI–iv–V–i] no rage. no wreck. no red right hand. just the hush-hush crush of the in-between. just “fine,” just “next,” just “who gives a damn.” love goes low while the bright goes dim— in the hush / in the blurring bland, the artist dust / worked by mild dead hands. [Bridge] [PERFORMANCE: Most exposed, freer rubato, tender dread] [ARRANGEMENT: Higher register, thinner voicings, long silences] [HARMONY: i–ivm–♭II–i(add9) | i–♭VImaj7–ivm–V(sus)] little room / borrowed air, new song trembling there. no one jeers. no one sings. stillness wears the ring of rings. [Final Chorus] [PERFORMANCE: Fullest delivery, solemn and devastating] [ARRANGEMENT: Largest marimba sonority, wide rolled voicings, sustained tremolo on last lines] [HARMONY: i–♭VI–iv–V–i, expanded 9ths/11ths, final i(add9)] no rage. no wreck. no red right hand. just the hush-hush crush of the in-between. just “fine,” just “next,” just “who gives a damn.” love goes low while the bright goes dim— in the hush / in the blurring bland, the artist dust / worked by mild dead hands. [Outro] [PERFORMANCE: Almost motionless, dying-breath pacing] [ARRANGEMENT: Isolated low rolls, upper-register fragment, long decay] [HARMONY: i(add9)–ivm6–i, then open fifth with added 9] less by less. dim by dim. till the yes forgets its hymn.