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Oh! Susanna | SUNOvisionJudgeSong

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April 8, 2025 at 9:53 AMv4

Dedication: For my two beloved rescue dogs -- who really did come to me from Alabama. I often think of their frightening, 30-hour journeys that they both had to undergo to make it to their new home with me. As only puppies! One was too traumatized to even come out of his transport van -- and couldn't stop trembling amid his terror, after they finally got him into my waiting arms. Glad to report that he is now my happy, happy boy! NOTES ON THIS SONG ARE AT THE VERY BOTTOM --------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, details on how to enter SUNOvision2025: SONG SUBMISSIONS Via SUNOvision Discord server https://discord.gg/dQA3GZaT #song-submission (channel) Also leave a comment that you've entered on the original promo song: https://suno.com/song/f5f5e5e5-45c7-4668-92f8-8da3f438d26b In anticipation of Eurovision this year, @Nepenthepoesia will be hosting Sunovision 2025! Everyone is welcome to participate. This year it’s just for fun and celebration, so let’s use our talents to inspire each other! Rules: 1.) Create one original song with #Sunovision2025 in the title that inspires us and best showcases your work as a Suno artist! Comment on Nepenthe's SUNOvision theme song (@Nepenthe) when it's ready! If you prefer to use a previously-released original song, it should be no older than September 1st, 2024. The song must have lyrics–original, Suno-generated, or a mix of both. You are encouraged to put which country you are representing in the song title or above the song lyrics. 2.) You’re also encouraged to create a song in your native language, but ultimately you choose the preferred language! Feel free to give a short synopsis of your song above the lyrics. An English translation of your lyrics would be appreciated as well but not required. 3.) Your song may not be longer than four minutes and zero seconds long. 4.) Avoid where possible things like vulgarity (swear words, slurs), explicit sexual content, political views, religious views, views on current events or topics that are likely divisive. 5.) Songs must be submitted no later than May 1st at 11:59 PM (Eastern Standard Time)! ~A Special Note Please share this with anyone you think would enjoy participating! Everyone is invited! A special encouragement to women and members of the LGBTQ+ community to participate in this event!~ Voting & Playlists: 1.) All entries will be included in Sunovision 2025 playlists (volumes of up to 40 songs each at first). They will be found in playlists under this profile: (https://suno.com/@nepenthepoesia) (After the event ends, they will all be combined into one Sunovision 2025 playlist depending on how many entries.) 2.) Initial voting for Top 20 will be a popular vote that will occur between May 2nd and May 9th via Google Form within the Tinkertune Tavern Discord server (https://discord.gg/T8bck2mV). The Google Form will also be available here and on the Discord server from May 2nd to May 9th: (Google Form link incoming!) Please vote for your favorite Sunovision2025 submission! 3.) Top 20 songs will be announced May 10th and will be included on a separate playlist called TOP 20 Sunovision 2025 4.) Voting for Top 10, including winning song, will take place between May 11th and May 12th within the Tinkertune Tavern Discord server. Votes will be determined by jury ranking. Our jury members so far are (Gibeligob, LKN, The Jester, WavyScho and ArthemiSEE)! *Jury members are welcome to create a song but are ineligible to win* Jury profiles → https://suno.com/@the_tavern https://suno.com/@lucky_nobody https://suno.com/@the_jestermc https://suno.com/@wavyscho https://suno.com/@arthemisee https://suno.com/@tensetrombone 5.) Winner will be announced during a Listening Party on May 13th at 6 PM EST in the Tinkertune Tavern Discord server, as well as the publication of the TOP 10 Sunovision 2025 playlist. (Playlist will also include the theme song and jury member songs–approx. 14-17 total songs). ---------------------------------------------------------- OH! SUSANNA I have a dream In the middle of night When ev'rything is still I think I see
 Susanna, She's runnin’ down a hill A cake of buck-wheat It fills her mouth Her tears are steam, They crowd her eyes I say, "I'm comin’ from the south, My Susanna, Don't ya cry" Oh! Susanna Oh, don’t ya cry for me I come from Alabama With my banjo on my knee Original song published by Stephen Foster circa 1848 Restoration, arrangement, new melody & additional lyrics Copyright 4-4-2025 by LKN -------------------------------------------------------------------- NOTES: “Oh! Susanna” is one of the most popular American songs ever written. Although it was composed in the folk traditon, it actually takes its beat from polka (1,2,1,2
). It was authored by Stephen Foster, who (due to its massive success) then went on to become the first full-time professional songwriter in the United States. (Check out his other masterful works.) Over the years, bits and pieces and even full verses were redacted from this song, until it lost its original intention: the documentation of a harrowing and perilous journey. This also left the song almost cheery and nonsensical: Why in the world does Susanna want to cry? Her lover’s on his way
 He’s even gonna play his banjo for her! So I myself never really understood nor appreciated this song — until I stumbled across some of those lost verses, while simply looking for its lyrics
 And I was searching for them as I was in a guitar group that wished to perform this. I told them that I thought we had a real chance here — and asked them if we could please put back at least one of those redacted verses? Answer: No. —Do I even need to finish this story? Via this platform, I was finally able to happily restore this song in only one long morning and afternoon: something that I’d been wanting to do, for already five years. While I was at it, I also revised/re-metered its entire lyrics (save the chorus) to give them a new melody. I next decided to change its structure by adding a bridge that I fashioned from a discarded verse/additional lyrics. Then I made another decision to NOT have any banjo on it (the banjo being an obvious choice) and to instead feature banjolele -- yet only as its main rhythm instrument. —Thank you, SUNO! P.S. And my old guitar group? They disbanded. When one of its two leaders moved to Florida. 😎

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LightJourner

LightJourner 6w ago

oh yeah this is it, this is my vibe, love it 💚

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thanks! I feel like I now have a little bit of a better window, into your own taste...

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🏛MatchaChocolate69đŸ‘ïžâ€đŸ—šïž

🏛MatchaChocolate69đŸ‘ïžâ€đŸ—šïž 6w ago

How can words even capture the beauty of this song?
A reinterpretation of a great classic, that song we all know, the very embodiment of American folk.
I don’t think you could have chosen a more iconic piece to represent the USA, its roots, and its musical tradition.
But your version elevates it, makes it modern, with that fantastic female vocal performance and your revised lyrics.
The banjo is perfect gritty, but warm and the percussion adds an epic touch that makes the track thrilling.

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🏛MatchaChocolate69đŸ‘ïžâ€đŸ—šïž

🏛MatchaChocolate69đŸ‘ïžâ€đŸ—šïž 6w ago

My muse, if you weren’t a judge, the victory would clearly be yours 💚

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WavyScho

WavyScho 6w ago

Poetic, story of devotion and hardship. With a surreal dream aspect

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Wow! Thanks, Wavy... Yes, the "dream sequence" that I placed as the bridge is actually another verse that was cut out of this song, over the years.... It makes me happy, simply to see it back there!

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ΛMΞX

ΛMΞX 6w ago

WOW 💚 This is such a beautiful and heart-touching song! The melody is astonishing, and the lyrics are so poetic. 10/10 – you've definitely got my Sunovision vote! Congrats!🎉🎉🎉 👾💚

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

AMIX, you found it already! That makes me happy. Yet I am actually a JUDGE in this! (As much as I love the idea of having your vote.)

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🛑 Lucilius 🛑

🛑 Lucilius 🛑 6w ago

I note that you're sticking with the same theme as your previous song, with nursery rhymes and popular songs from the United States.
That's very good; it gives meaning to artistic creation.
There's always a human being behind an AI-assisted creation; thank you for reminding us of that with your song.

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thank you, Lucilius. I just took an AI Songwriting class at Berklee, and fully one-third of it was ethical discussions/essays. Authenticity has always been important in music, yet now it's maybe even MORE so, when it comes to AI music: It's a powerful tool that can be used to different ends. We all have this same powerful chance here, to achieve some good things for the world. BTW, you yourself are already doing this, in the way that you both build and support community. Thank YOU!

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Nepenthe â€ïžđŸ§ĄđŸ’›đŸ’šđŸ’™đŸ’œ

Nepenthe â€ïžđŸ§ĄđŸ’›đŸ’šđŸ’™đŸ’œ 6w ago

So listen. I was also familiar with this song and probably never saw any of the other lyrics either. And I was never a fan of the original song before -- but my goodness, this is beautiful and so pleasant to listen to. And with your efforts to emulate closer its original tone, I'm such a fan! I'm so happy to have reached out to you and gotten the chance to meet you - I respect and appreciate the thoughtful work you do with your music so much <3

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thanks so much, Nepenthe. Yes, I'll admit that previous, superficial versions of this song even got on my nerves... Then I came across those lost verses and learned what it was really supposed to be about. BTW, I left the relationship here same-sex in your honor -- because (as prev discussed) I feel we ALL (not just some of us) deserve to have our lives reflected back to us via the arts. Thanks for listening to my concerns re: diversity and the way we've already worked together to increase it!

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Δ∙Ɗ∙Q∙ Luiz★Felip≡

Δ∙Ɗ∙Q∙ Luiz★Felip≡ 6w ago

Amazing, you may get lost in the beautiful melody, but the lyrics keep calling attention to the meaning. Great track, love it.

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thank you so much! You actually made me resume my journey to restore this song: when I did my other recent one for your excellent kindergarten challenge. I had this idea about five years ago, when my guitar group was going to perform this song -- yet they vetoed my idea to put back some of its redacted verses.

Otherwise, thank you again for all your hard work in regard to your own recent challenge.... I love how these events help to bring our community together.

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Nenolo

Nenolo 6w ago

Beautiful, elegant, poetic... It's always a joy to hear your songs âœšđŸ«‚â€ïž

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thanks so much, Nenolo! I am also always moved to joy by your own songs.

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Wine loves flowers

Wine loves flowers 6w ago

💗👍💗👍

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

TY! 💚

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 ᮀɮᮊᮀ ᎀꜱ᎛ʀᎀ⛄

ᮀɮᮊᮀ ᎀꜱ᎛ʀᎀ⛄ 6w ago

I’m new here, but I’m so glad I heard this✹ What a beautiful dedication to your little guardians of joy. I loved it—such a moving story, a catchy chorus, and I adore the southern feel. I’ve never tried making indie folk rock myself, but I always appreciate listening to the genređŸ©”

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thanks so much, Anja! And welcome. I'm touched by your phrase "little guardians of joy" -- so true! I only hope you'll enter this new song showcase? If so, I'm wishing you the best with that -- and everything else!

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Arash.Ash

Arash.Ash 6w ago

This song is absolutely amazing! I was mesmerized by the story it tells... Incredible, as always! âœšđŸŽ¶âœšđŸ’™đŸ‘

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thanks so much! Yes, if you know the other, redacted versions? It's a tragedy, how much power was stripped from this song's original composition. I was riveted, when I simply read its lost verses. So happy to have them back where they belong!

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èŁŽèŠžPuiWan

èŁŽèŠžPuiWan 6w ago

the banjolele really adds a unique touch to this song.â€ïžâ€ïžđŸ‘đŸ»

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thank you. It's an instrument I both own and love. I feel it drives this song along like the "little train that thought it could..." "I think I can, I think I can...." It's a children's song about a train with a small engine. It gives itself a pep talk, as it pushes itself uphill.

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Boom-BoomAI

Boom-BoomAI 6w ago

This is lovely, I have two rescue dogs too, Pretzel and Cosmo. This really reminds me of Cosmo. I originally planned to adopt an older dog, closer to Pretzel’s age, but when I saw Cosmo, he was so terrified. I knew right then, we had to get him out of there. It's been almost a year now. No regrets.

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

100 per cent. I fell in love with my boy at first sight (via his lone photo that his rescue had taken). They had just pulled him out of a high-kill shelter situation. He was cowering and looked absolutely terrified in that shot. (Esp since he's a sensitive retriever type.) Adopting him w/o meeting him in-person felt like agreeing to a maybe 10-year long blind date so I was super nervous. Now? Best decision I ever made. Lovely to hear about your own two precious rescues! Thanks for sharing it.

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NSM3

NSM3 6w ago

This is so full of heart and roots — it resonates deeply. đŸŒŸ
At WđŸ€˜E-, our mission is to press where it hurts, stir the soul, and echo what can’t be said out loud.
When the past and the present sing together, the melody hits different.
Sending warm cheers from the edge of our own journey. đŸŒ…â€ïžđŸ«¶

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

100 per cent! Thank you for such a kind and thoughtful comment. From my universe -- to yours. 💚💚

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Potoo-phonic Peacock Pop

Potoo-phonic Peacock Pop 6w ago

This is good, really really good. It is a radio hit. The only thing I fear is that her bottom could get wet there. But yeah that is nature and she is so in her play that she doesn't care.

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thank you very much. As I am such a fan of your own work, what you have said means a lot to me! And you are 100 per cent correct: water WOULD ruin that beautiful, sequined dress! 😊 Let me add that to the list of perils upon her journey... 😆

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Aishindarkness

Aishindarkness 6w ago

this song is amazing 😍 can u check my new song

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Yes, TY, I certainly will! I'd also like to encourage you to enter this showcase.

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Jâˆ™Ï…âˆ™Ń•âˆ™Ï„âˆ™ Æ”âˆ™ÆŽâˆ™Éąâˆ™Î±âˆ™Ăž

Jâˆ™Ï…âˆ™Ń•âˆ™Ï„âˆ™ Æ”âˆ™ÆŽâˆ™Éąâˆ™Î±âˆ™Ăž 6w ago

Brilliant work, LKN. What you’ve created is truly beautiful... your song has a magnificent melody that takes us on a journey! The lyrics are also moving, along with the vocals. A beautiful song — you’re truly special. Thank you for this musical experience.

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment. Even only one like that makes all the hours of hard work worth it. Thank you again for your kindness and support.

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Beat

Beat 6w ago

Very good đŸ€đŸ‘

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

TY! 💚

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

TY!
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Matthew Jopek

Matthew Jopek 6w ago

Great! Love the vibeđŸŽ¶ #sunovision2025đŸŽ”

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LKN 💚

LKN 💚 6w ago

Thanks, Matthew. And yeah -- let's go! #SUNOvision2025!

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