[spoken] Uhm what? I wasn’t listening Are you talking to me? You…uhm…rapping or having a seizure? Breathe Catch your breath Ha Hold on guys this will just take a sec’ [verse] What the fuck got up your butt Such a distance that you thought Anyone would listen long To the dissonance of that dumb ass song Belongs on the studio floor Swept up to bore no more Coz your beats are weak need reworking The rhymes you speak Need syllabic tuning You seem to be reaching for rhythm And in that focus you lack verbal precision That is The locus of your vision isnt based on innovation Experience or earned wisdom rather crudely constructed on emulation half assed muttered mush mouth, pro tip If you lack confidence Doubt your concept It comes off as disingenuous Or a best incompetent Now then friend, what had you intended to express A diss string cobbled into a bauble Hobbled by its lack of direction? Was That Your intention, if so bravo. No? Thought Just stop Vocabulary repetitive Content derivative Fulla stutters and flutters Cuttin words in half Coverin shit with a cough and a laugh Write out your cliches Ditch the ands and -ings Before you do anymore challenging. Later gator and thank your maker It was me and not someone else Most folk just chop your shlock And send you rhymin to hell Get better, be well, and not to be a snob but Dont quit yer day job Ghhv
