NoticeMe (Remastered)

[STYLE] Devotional alternative metal fused with melodic metalcore, dark R&B atmosphere, cinematic post-metal, gothic progressive metalcore, emotional 2000s metalcore energy, massive anthemic choruses, intimate piano-to-breakdown dynamics [MOOD] Moonlit, desperate, devotional, heavy, wounded, romantic, self-blaming, overwhelmed, sacred and violent, beautiful collapse, grief under pressure, pulled in too many directions, letting everyone down [KEY] F minor [TEMPO] 72 BPM intimate intro, building into 144 BPM double-time metalcore intensity, huge half-time breakdown impact [SOUND] Soft haunting piano, deep sub bass, spacious reverb, eerie synth pads, cinematic ambience, electronic pulse, thick low-tuned bass, Drop A guitars, crushing djent chugs, melodic metalcore riffs, huge toms, crisp snares, double-kick bursts, choir-like backing layers, dramatic pauses, explosive guitar entry in chorus [VOCALS] Intimate breathy lead vocals in verses, soulful R&B phrasing, controlled vibrato, emo

V5.5

[Intro: ambient piano playing D–F–A–F, distant vinyl crackle, soft breath before vocal]

I keep your name behind my teeth
like something holy, something for me
I watch you move through crowded rooms
like the light was made for you

And I’m still here
hands full of almost
leaning in the doorway
trying not to show it

[Verse 1: breathy Dayseeker-style clean vocal, cello holding low D drone, soft kick pulse]

You say my name and I restart
i was so lonely before the spark
I laugh too hard, then look away
teach my pulse how to behave

Every time you pass me by
my ribs go quiet, then ignite
I swear I feel the whole room shift
and you don’t even notice it

[Pre-Chorus: drums building, violin rising F–G–A–C, clean guitar swelling]

I don’t need forever
I don’t need the sky to split
I just need one second
where you look at me like this

Like maybe I’m not background
like maybe I’m not air
like maybe when I’m aching
you can feel me standing there

[Chorus: huge Atreyu-style hook, Drop C guitars, progression Dm–Bb–F–C, belted clean vocals]

Does she even notice me?
Or am I screaming underneath the silence?
A heart-shaped casualty
bleeding out in perfect quiet

I’d set myself on fire
just to warm the space beside you
I’d crawl out of my skin
if it meant I could get through

Does she even notice me?
Or am I just loving her where she can’t see?

[Post-Chorus: layered vocal harmonies, violin echoing A–G–F–E–D]

Where she can’t see
where she can’t see
I’m right here breaking
where she can’t see

[Verse 2: darker Sleep Token-style groove, sub bass, muted guitar pulses, intimate vocal]

I know the rhythm of your tired smile
the little cracks you hide in style
the way your voice turns soft at night
when you think nobody reads the signs

Maybe that’s the cruelest part
I see the bruises on your heart
but I’m not close enough to touch
not brave enough to call it love

[Pre-Chorus 2: bigger drums, piano doubles vocal melody, violin climbing higher]

I don’t want to beg you
but I’m running out of pride
there’s a prayer in my throat
and a knife behind my eyes

So give me one damn moment
give me proof that I exist
turn your face toward the wreckage
and tell me you feel this

[Chorus 2: full band, belted clean vocal, screamed backing vocals tucked underneath last four lines]

Does she even notice me?
Or am I screaming underneath the silence?
A heart-shaped casualty
bleeding out in perfect quiet

I’d set myself on fire
just to warm the space beside you
I’d crawl out of my skin
if it meant I could get through

Does she even notice me?
Or am I just loving her where she can’t see?

[screamed backing vocals underneath]
Where she can’t see
where she can’t see
I’m still bleeding
where she can’t see

[Bridge: stripped piano, no drums, whispered clean vocal, cello low D sustained]

Maybe I’m a fool
with a mouth full of your name
Maybe I’m the candle
you forgot was still a flame

Maybe I’m too soft
Maybe I’m too much
Maybe I’m the almost
you were never meant to touch

But God, I keep hoping
like hope doesn’t hurt
like wanting you quietly
isn’t making it worse

[Breakdown: sudden silence, then low C/D chugs, harsh screams lead, Atreyu-style gang shouts underneath]

Look at me.
Just once.
Like I’m not another shadow in the room.

Say my name.
Just once.
Like it means something coming from you.

[screamed]
I have been patient.
I have been starving.
I have been yours
without you asking.

[gang shout]
Do you feel me now?

[screamed]
Do you feel me now?
Do you feel me now?
Or am I still nothing?

[Final Chorus: massive clean vocal, harsh screams behind, high violin A–Bb–C–D over Drop C guitars]

Does she even notice me?
Or am I screaming underneath the silence?
A heart-shaped casualty
bleeding out in perfect quiet

I’d set myself on fire
just to warm the space beside you
I’d crawl out of my skin
if it meant I could get through

Does she even notice me?
Or am I just loving her where she can’t see?

[screamed backing vocals]
Where she can’t see
where she can’t see
I’m still yours
where she can’t see

[Outro: piano returns to D–F–A–F, violin fading A–G–F–E–D, whispered vocal]

Does she even notice me?
Or am I already gone?
Did I build a chapel
inside a heart she’ll never walk into at all?

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[Intro: ambient piano playing D–F–A–F, distant vinyl crackle, soft breath before vocal] I keep your name behind my teeth like something holy, something for me I watch you move through crowded rooms like the light was made for you And I’m still here hands full of almost leaning in the doorway trying not to show it [Verse 1: breathy Dayseeker-style clean vocal, cello holding low D drone, soft kick pulse] You say my name and I restart i was so lonely before the spark I laugh too hard, then look away teach my pulse how to behave Every time you pass me by my ribs go quiet, then ignite I swear I feel the whole room shift and you don’t even notice it [Pre-Chorus: drums building, violin rising F–G–A–C, clean guitar swelling] I don’t need forever I don’t need the sky to split I just need one second where you look at me like this Like maybe I’m not background like maybe I’m not air like maybe when I’m aching you can feel me standing there [Chorus: huge Atreyu-style hook, Drop C guitars, progression Dm–Bb–F–C, belted clean vocals] Does she even notice me? Or am I screaming underneath the silence? A heart-shaped casualty bleeding out in perfect quiet I’d set myself on fire just to warm the space beside you I’d crawl out of my skin if it meant I could get through Does she even notice me? Or am I just loving her where she can’t see? [Post-Chorus: layered vocal harmonies, violin echoing A–G–F–E–D] Where she can’t see where she can’t see I’m right here breaking where she can’t see [Verse 2: darker Sleep Token-style groove, sub bass, muted guitar pulses, intimate vocal] I know the rhythm of your tired smile the little cracks you hide in style the way your voice turns soft at night when you think nobody reads the signs Maybe that’s the cruelest part I see the bruises on your heart but I’m not close enough to touch not brave enough to call it love [Pre-Chorus 2: bigger drums, piano doubles vocal melody, violin climbing higher] I don’t want to beg you but I’m running out of pride there’s a prayer in my throat and a knife behind my eyes So give me one damn moment give me proof that I exist turn your face toward the wreckage and tell me you feel this [Chorus 2: full band, belted clean vocal, screamed backing vocals tucked underneath last four lines] Does she even notice me? Or am I screaming underneath the silence? A heart-shaped casualty bleeding out in perfect quiet I’d set myself on fire just to warm the space beside you I’d crawl out of my skin if it meant I could get through Does she even notice me? Or am I just loving her where she can’t see? [screamed backing vocals underneath] Where she can’t see where she can’t see I’m still bleeding where she can’t see [Bridge: stripped piano, no drums, whispered clean vocal, cello low D sustained] Maybe I’m a fool with a mouth full of your name Maybe I’m the candle you forgot was still a flame Maybe I’m too soft Maybe I’m too much Maybe I’m the almost you were never meant to touch But God, I keep hoping like hope doesn’t hurt like wanting you quietly isn’t making it worse [Breakdown: sudden silence, then low C/D chugs, harsh screams lead, Atreyu-style gang shouts underneath] Look at me. Just once. Like I’m not another shadow in the room. Say my name. Just once. Like it means something coming from you. [screamed] I have been patient. I have been starving. I have been yours without you asking. [gang shout] Do you feel me now? [screamed] Do you feel me now? Do you feel me now? Or am I still nothing? [Final Chorus: massive clean vocal, harsh screams behind, high violin A–Bb–C–D over Drop C guitars] Does she even notice me? Or am I screaming underneath the silence? A heart-shaped casualty bleeding out in perfect quiet I’d set myself on fire just to warm the space beside you I’d crawl out of my skin if it meant I could get through Does she even notice me? Or am I just loving her where she can’t see? [screamed backing vocals] Where she can’t see where she can’t see I’m still yours where she can’t see [Outro: piano returns to D–F–A–F, violin fading A–G–F–E–D, whispered vocal] Does she even notice me? Or am I already gone? Did I build a chapel inside a heart she’ll never walk into at all?

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