
Twilight
[© The Twilight - Artimus The Poet 2-20-2025 Susan Manley All Rights Reserved. I am starting something new... the etymology of my song.. to explain how it was created. First off the first half of this lyric is a poem I wrote in 1985 to impress a boy. Yep, you got that right. This guy who was "the silicon matchmaker" of Matchmaker.com taught me to write poetry and gave me the hunger. We dated briefly, but we are lifelong friends. Richard can write a poem on the fly on any subject in his head and say it to you. He started writing young, and now he can just spout poems. He did this to impress me and well... as you can see it stuck. So I wrote him the beginning of this song. ( But hint here, just keep writing and eventually they write themselves!) So then the second half of this song? It was created here on Suno I realized that the original poem needed context, to be longer and completion. What was the point of the poem. And so I realized that the rise of the purple in the day was a measurement of time. And a visual marker to our life moving forward but also slipping away. And so I wrote the rest of the lyric to reflect that. And so the lyric became its poetic self. I first published this song on Suno 9-7-24 and it is included in my first album The Alchemy of Life. Recently with the release of V4 on Suno I have been going back through my old catalog and updating those songs, with grander music, with a younger hipper vibe and shooting for a more commercial and current sound. ( oh no's). Yes my point is to make music people like and release it to the many. And not just Suno but beyond. I hope to hear from all of you on the inside here on Suno and outside of Suno too! - Artimus)] Over the mountains the purple comes rolling lit like a backdrop silhouette glowing Soon to meet the valley in cascades of light to make day of what has been night The sun with shine the stars will fade And some will sleep while others awake And soon once again that purple will rise and push the light out from the skies The Twilight it comes every day the purple haze descending over the planet the marking of the passage of time to reflect on how it's, spent to relax sublime And where memories are swept It pulls us forward into nights inky depths where the day is forgotten in sleep in dreams we rest [guitar interlude] , [Verse] later dawn will arise and wipe sleep from our eyes with pink it is so bright it evaporates mist and brings to light All that is the day progresses through the haze and if we have planned it it can be jam. packed . in... [Verse] Over the mountains the purple comes rolling lit like a backdrop silhouette glowing [guitar interlude] Soon to meet the valley in cascades of light to make day of what has been night (to make day of what has been night) [Outro] The sun with shine the stars will fade And some will sleep while others awake And soon once again that purple will rise and push the light out from the skies Stop and watch that glory of the passing to the night the purple into twilight it marks the march of your life inching forward to the unknown Time is the only currency... you never know the balance of so spend it wisely Spend it wisely.... (Spend it wisely) before you go [epic guitar outro] before you go [music fades] [end]
29 Comments
UltimaWolf 12w ago
Wow, this is amazing! 🥰🎶
Artimus The Poet 12w ago
The more we play with the system, the more we find we can get it to do. Lots of learning.
【Cool⭐Beat】 13w ago
Wow!!!!! the layer vocal !!! the chorus so good @.@
exegis 8w ago
Love the "banger"
Yagrashka 13w ago
Beautiful
Brandon Luke 13w ago
I agree. Beautiful.
New Envision 13w ago
Beautiful!
UnmovableIndustrialFolk6820 13w ago
slay
Blacksmile 13w ago
Pourquoi ? Dis le moi·
EvilTyromancer 13w ago
great lyrics and vibe!
Artimus The Poet 13w ago
Thanks!
STEZIOUS 13w ago
I love your stuff, everytime you crush it
Artimus The Poet 13w ago
Thanks, this is another poem I wrote originally in 1987 or so? and made a song of it last year. It was time I brought it into V4 and I did it with a facelift!
MrWholesome 13w ago
💖💖
Jonathan David 13w ago
Wonderful voice!
Artimus The Poet 13w ago
Yeah Suno came through!
Heymow 13w ago
❤️❤️
hopeRam 13w ago
Awesome 👍
Wine loves flowers 13w ago
👍💗
Lisa Sky 23h ago
Love this song 🙏
Artimus The Poet 21h ago
Thanks!
sgyoungpoet 13w ago
nice
Midknightoil ☢ 13w ago
Great guitar shredding to awesome lyrics!!
Sharkeuss 13w ago
amazing <3
Brandon Luke 13w ago
Aw, really nice. Song. 🔥🔥🔥
Artcanum 13w ago
Suno, why can't I put 500 likes on this song?
Artimus The Poet 13w ago
LOL noo we can put the credits in but we only get 1 like per customer, no exceptions.
Artcanum 13w ago
When you know from the first seconds that it's going to be awesome!