[Rusty Fiddle Loop, Broken Banjo Riff, Wind Howl FX] [male, Low Whisper, panned left → right] devil at the hollow... calls my name... [Verse 1] [male, Dry Vocal, tight mic, faint guitar hum] Mama said, “Boy, don’t run that trail,” But the ridge was hot and the moon was pale Dust on my boots and a hand on my belt Heaven can’t help what the mountain felt [short laugh echoing in the distance] Heh— felt like fire. [whipcrack FX → banjo slide] [Bridge Break] [Original Riff Enters – bent note, delay, → low drone synth] [spoken, male, southern drawl] Pine Hollow’s deep... Deeper than guilt... Ain’t no man ever crossed it clean. [soft delay repeat]: crossed it clean... [Chorus] [female vocals, layered, soft but rising, chorus FX] Devil at Pine Hollow... (hollow hollow hollow) Howlin’ in the cold... Took my love and swallowed... (swallowed… oh lord) Left me with no soul. [silence – heartbeat FX] No soul... [Verse 2] [male, raspy, dry, close mic] Johnny rode with the wind at his back Had a jug full of fear and a heart gone black He said, “Ain’t no woman worth that climb,” Now he’s sleepin’ in the pines, in a bed of time [Breakbeat clap – echo FX] “Time don't bleed but it sure forgets” That’s the last thing Johnny said... [Bridge – Cliffhanger FX] [Banjo picks, slowed down, tape wobble FX] [male, whispering, fading in and out] What’s waitin’ in the shadow— isn’t always what you fear... Sometimes it’s love. Sometimes it’s clear... but mostly? [pause] Mostly it’s gone. [Chorus] [female chorus, layered with childlike voice echoing last line] Devil at Pine Hollow... (echo: devil… devil…) Left a scar so wide... Kissed her by the gallows... (echo: kissed her…) Now she sleeps on the other side... [Interlude – Original Riff Extended, Instrumental] [guitar riff → modulated fiddle → vocal breathing → wolf howl sample] [Verse 3 – Intense] [male vocal, grit and fury, punchy phrasing] A shot rang out by the sycamore bend I ran through hell to find her again Boots sank deep in the graveyard clay Lord, I begged, “Don’t take her away” [short vocal FX: inhale, then—] But the Hollow already had her name... [male scream: drawn out , reverb tail] "Naaaame!" [Bridge → Final Chorus Setup] [Slow Build: church organ enters under strings] [female whisper layered under fiddle:] She never left. She never left. She never— [Final Chorus] [duet: male + female, full harmonies, high reverb, echo FX] Devil at Pine Hollow... (devil… hollow…) Now I walk alone... Left my heart in sorrow... She became my home. (my home… my home…) [soft laugh FX, fades into silence] [Outro – Cliffhanger Line, No Music] [male whisper, dry] If you hear her call... Don’t follow. [silence – wind FX returns]

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11 Comments

HeloAV8er

HeloAV8er 6w ago

Excellent. You take it to the next level!

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Fervex

Fervex 6w ago

Thank you very much! )

Nadador Compulsivo

Nadador Compulsivo 6w ago

Deliciosamente oscura como el buen café...

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Fervex

Fervex 6w ago

Bebí whisky))

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Preliator

Preliator 2w ago

Whoa! Playlisted high... the words, the music, the story telling blended together. I tip my hat at thee!

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Fervex

Fervex 2w ago

Thank you very much! )

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Fervex

Fervex 2w ago

Thank you! )))

MedievalHolograms439

MedievalHolograms439 4w ago

such fun 🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Fervex

Fervex 4w ago

Thank you! )))

Enyawah Music

Enyawah Music 5w ago

👍

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Fervex

Fervex 5w ago

Thank you! )))

King Surf DeVille

King Surf DeVille 5w ago

Hey Fervex
Say have you had any luck getting SUNO to follow a set Key or Scale for a song?
How about Key changes mid song?
How about Time signature like ¾?
Does SUNO allow a user to use a rests or pauses?🔥

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Fervex

Fervex 5w ago

Hi.
Yes, you can set a single key, but then SUNO makes the song too flat and bland.
I use prompts (sometimes it works, more often not))
Yes, you can set the time signature, but that’s also a lottery(
Pauses — yes. The usual prompt [pause] works, you can also add time like [pause - 4s]

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Радио Пастор

Радио Пастор 6w ago

made my day

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Радио Пастор

Радио Пастор 6w ago

dynamite man

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Zorro17

Zorro17 6w ago

¡Qué gran canción! ¡Me encanta el ritmo y a pesar de que la letra da miedo, te hace empezar a bailar! ¡Parece un demonio muy simpático!😅❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥👍👍👍👍

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Fervex

Fervex 6w ago

Jaja)) Muchas gracias)

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