These are the tightest lyrics I've ever written. A challenge of sort. Count the syllables for each rhyme scheme if you wish 🤷♂️ Some word choices might not be optimal, but those triple rhymes were very difficult to land on time. I got stuck a few times using rhymezone, so I asked Grok for help in a couple of spots. This is obviously a metaphor for incompatible lovers, but it's also quite literal, in a sense. I thought a volcano's climax melting its lover was quite funny. The production took almost as many hours... I'm really happy with the 4 transitions and the sound quality was maintained fairly well for a 6+ minute song. If you don't love the songs I make, I hope you can at least appreciate the uniqueness I'm trying to create instead of pooping out countless 50 credit slops like way too many do. === [Volcano] New passion streams, toward your distant peaks, mesmerized Old fury dreams, of the touch it seeks, paralyzed Fierce magma teems, with the want it keeps, compromised Soft embers gleam, where the pressure seeps, dramatized Ancient fires burn, in the quiet of your reign, intensified Hidden rivers turn, through the channels of my pain, dignified Sacred tremors yearn, for the stillness you sustain, simplified Fierce affections earn, what the chasm can't contain, mystified Yet every night I glow a little softer in your view And every dawn your edges catch a hint of warmer hue Though we both know this pull can never lead to something true I choose to rumble softer, just to harmonize with you Oh Glacier My love Can't you come a little Closer My love I'd try once, twice and thrice For an impossible love Between fire and ice [Glacier] Old stillness wakes, beneath your rumbling call, mesmerized New fractures trace, the heat that dares to fall, hypnotized Deep veins embrace, what my core cannot erase, compromised Blue rivers chase, your distant glowing grace, dramatized Ancient patience burns, in the shimmer of your flame, intensified Hidden echoes turn, through the caverns of my name, dignified Sacred coldness yearns, for the fire you sustain, simplified Quiet longings earn, what the distance can't restrain, mystified Yet every dawn I glisten a little brighter in your light And every dusk your embers paint my edges warm and bright Though we both know this ache can never truly bridge the height I choose to calve a little softer, just to answer you tonight Oh Fire My love Can't you come a little Closer My love I'd try once, twice and thrice For an impossible love Between fire and ice Closer, my flame Just a little closer ...You're... trembling… Feel how cold I am Let it press against you Deeper, my heat Melt into my blue ...Your pressure… rising… Don’t hold back now Let it build, let it surge Come on, explode for me Release it all, my love I can take it… I can take it… ...Can you? Yes you can Now! [Volcano] The glacier sighs, a final breath of blue Dissolving slowly into rivers running new Her ancient form collapses, soft and wet A shimmering goodbye from a flawless monument And I, the mountain, weep in molten streams Lava tears that burn through all my dreams What have I done, my love, what have I done? Forever scarred beneath my blazing sun Oh Glacier… Glacier… My impossible one I’d give every ember To undo what I've done To undo what you’ve become Oh Glacier... Glacier… My love… Now forever gone
