[Tempo: Slow swing (6/8) – deep, smokey, timeless Voice: Rich, deep, and angelic — think Mahalia meets Etta] [Verse 1] I woke up with tears on my pillow, Dreamin’ of a time I used to know. Mama’s voice hummin’ low by the window, Sayin’ ā€œChild, keep walkin’, let the storm blow.ā€ [Chorus – Gospel harmony behind her] šŸŽ¶ If the river don’t rise, I’ll be comin’ home Walkin’ that dusty road all alone. The world may shake, the sky might cry, But my soul gon’ sing ā€˜til the day I die. šŸŽ¶ [Verse 2] I’ve carried pain in my apron string, Hung my hope on the song I sing. I’ve been bent, but I ain’t broke, A holy fire in every note I spoke. [Chorus – Add tambourine, hand claps] šŸŽ¶ If the river don’t rise, I’ll be comin’ home Feet may blister, but I still roam. The winds may wail, the nights get long, But I got heaven burnin’ in my song. šŸŽ¶ [Bridge – A cappella, raw & powerful] Mmm… these chains can’t hold me, No, this dirt won’t fold me. They took my name, tried to dim my light, But the Lord gave me thunder in the night. [Final Chorus – Big, soulful, hands raised to the sky] šŸŽ¶ If the river don’t rise, I’ll be comin’ through, Singin’ with the angels in midnight blue. The world may tremble, but I won’t fall, 'Cause I was born with grace through it all. šŸŽ¶ [Outro – Soft, fading like the last crackle of fire] So if you hear that hymn on the wind tonight, Know I’m still singin’, still holdin’ tight... If the river don’t rise… I’ll be alright. šŸŽµ

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MK

MK 8w ago

This is pure soul. Felt like Mahalia whispering through the smoke. Every line hit deep — raw, honest, divine. ā€œIf the river don’t riseā€¦ā€ — yeah, I believe it. That’s gospel truth. šŸ™šŸŽ¶šŸ”„šŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ’ÆšŸ‘MK

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BrainBendersBanter

BrainBendersBanter 8w ago

Thank you so much my friend. Much appreciated. So happy you enjoyed it! Working on another one with this style too. šŸ˜Chrissy AKA BBB

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VJGHOST

VJGHOST 8w ago

Dude, this isn’t a delta—it’s a wildfire! This blues hooks you like a baited hook. Stunning work!šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„

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BrainBendersBanter

BrainBendersBanter 8w ago

šŸ˜ Yeah! So happy you enjoyed it! You Rock! Thank you!

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Ladyspiritbird

Ladyspiritbird 8w ago

šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

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BrainBendersBanter

BrainBendersBanter 8w ago

Thank you so much!

Gourou

Gourou 8w ago

Amazing song! Love the soul vibe in her voice šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„

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BrainBendersBanter

BrainBendersBanter 8w ago

Thank you so much!

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Teasea_the producer

Teasea_the producer 8w ago

šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„ fire fire šŸ‘

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BrainBendersBanter

BrainBendersBanter 8w ago

Thank you!

ottawaBound

ottawaBound 7w ago

so so well done. love it !!!! šŸ‘šŸ˜šŸ”„

ThoMood

ThoMood 7w ago

šŸ”„šŸ‘