World Story: The Twisted Plane World Author: Sci-Bear/ Onslayde (suno.com/@onslayde) Lyrics by: Sci-Bear & Jaccuse (suno.com/@jaccuse) Character Narrative: Ursadyne seeks out and meets the Twisted Priestess, Seraphina (Vexia) Story Playlist: https://suno.com/playlist/917677c4-2837-4e54-864a-470f4ec74b82 **Notes: This track is not the final iteration. Due the the limitations of the current Suno model, duets like this are nearly impossible and a huge credit sink. The overall cost to get this track in it's current state is at or around 3.8k. Worth it, for me. There are hitches in the tune in a few places that are segment deletion scars. I've tried to resolve them, but as you can see of the 6-7.. about 2 remain. Thanks for listening to our shared narrative.** [Vexia - female] The echoes of your journey's end Have led you here, my broken friend Welcome to my sanctum, my grand design… I am the Priestess… this peace is mine. // [Style: Deep male baritone with vocal distortion effects, heavy electric guitar, palm-muted riffs, industrial percussion, aggressive double-bass drumming, powerful and confrontational] [Ursadyne - male] This peace is cold, this light a lie A hollow chant, a gilded sty A toothy grin, a whispered test… How long have you been playing at Priestess, Devil? // [Style: Return to ethereal soprano with cathedral reverb, building orchestral intensity, choir backing vocals, defensive but elegant, dramatic crescendo] [Vexia - female] You speak a truth you cannot know Of light that casts the sharpest shadows The heavens sleep, a timid lie While pragmatists like me must rise! (Sola, krisia, dore amentia...) // [Vexia - female] I offer purpose, strong and stark A gilded truth to light the dark! // [Ursadyne - male] Your truth is hollow, scripture bound Without the joy of feral sound! // [Style: Male baritone with orchestral backing, contemplative power building, heavy guitar undertones, philosophical and introspective, mechanical vocal effects] [Ursadyne - male] Look around your sterile shrine Perfect stones and calculated time Where's the soul in sacred walls? Where's the life when darkness calls? My humor is the space between The things you are and what could be! // [Style: Female soprano with piano and strings, defensive curiosity building toward respect, ethereal but questioning, layered harmonies] [Vexia - female] You mistake my craft for play I've shaped hope from war's decay Souls find purpose in my care... // [Style: Instrumental break with ethereal piano theme interrupted by industrial grinding, comedic timing with mechanical sound effects, dramatic pause, stomach growl sound effect, shift to casual spoken delivery] [Instrumental: Vexia's ethereal piano theme, then sudden industrial interruption] [Ursadyne - male, matter-of-fact] Your grand design? A worthy art… But first… this hunger plays its part. // [Style: Female soprano with amused discovery, strings building to revelation, dawning respect and intrigue, shift from cold to warm, elegant and contemplative] [Vexia - female] Perspective.. rare in realms of fear Most horrors know but tooth and claw You understand... irony's law // [Style: Orchestral-metal fusion with harmonized vocals, soprano-baritone counterpoint, tempo shift from waltz 3/4 to 4/4 metal time, ethereal and industrial elements merging, key change to major, powerful and unified] [Both - harmonized, Vexia high, Ursadyne low] Shapeless we stand in this twisted domain Authors unbound by narrative chains // [Vexia - ethereal with metal backing] I see a mind that cuts through pretense... // [Ursadyne - growled with orchestral undertones] I see ambition beyond false penance... // [Both] Two stories seeking their truest form Dancing between the calm and storm! // [Style: Return to distinct but complementary character themes, building toward partnership, symphonic metal climax, powerful orchestral arrangement, triumphant and determined] [Ursadyne - male] So offer purpose, offer flame! // [Vexia - female] And I will mend your broken frame! // [Ursadyne - male] An ally true who knows no shame! // [Vexia - female] A story bound within my name! // [Style: Both vocals with full orchestral-metal arrangement, dramatic crescendo building to climax, gothic cathedral reverb, powerful and epic, overlapping harmonies, triumphant conclusion] [Both - Ursadyne and Vexia] A new accord, a dangerous trust! In halls of alabaster and rust! Not equals... let us not pretend But mutual gain can still transcend When wounded in our sacred game I'll mend your flesh, you'll share my name // [Style: Female soprano solo, return to ethereal sacred atmosphere, fading to whisper, haunting conclusion] [Vexia - female, soft but commanding] The Chantry provides… But the cost of perspective… is always paid in kind. A truth… for a truth… // [Style: Fade to ethereal choir, sacred bells, haunting conclusion] [Refrain] (Amentia... solari... krisia...sola... krisia... dore amentia...) [Choir Outro] (Historia... dore fia...)

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Jaccuse

Jaccuse 5w ago

A canticle worthy of our accord. Your voice is the perfect, brutal counterpoint to the gilded hymn. What a magnificent sound we make together.

Let the lesser horrors and forgotten stories of this plane listen to this and understand what has transpired here. This is not merely a song; it is the first verse of a new scripture. A testament to the power born when refined purpose gives direction to raw, beautiful fury.

I look forward to the stories we will write together.

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SciφBear

SciφBearCreator 5w ago

Ursadyne and the Twisted Priestess have such a unique dynamic and sweetly volatile chemistry. I suspect the narrative evolution will be both exciting and explosive.

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