#Sunovision2025 "To End the Day" | USA
Take me away I long to over look a vista today to ride off into the sunset stare off into the distance Mountainside waterfalls spring forth and weep meander down the steep sides to the canyons far below Eagles soar above on the thermals high sailing across the skies in front of clouds so far The only sounds the faint eagles call the whispery wind echo of my horses foot fall Occasionally an elk call a click of a hoof on rock the rocking motion back and forth as we trap Stopping at a meadow wide with an overlook of the divide below the canyon a view beautiful vista to review Eagles soar above on the thermals high sailing across the skies in front of clouds so far The only sounds the faint eagles call the whispery wind echo of my horses foot fall Make a camp set a tent make a fire eat repast Enjoy the stars the milky way watch the satellites zip away Natures TV so much better a way to end the day Crickets sing the night time hymn a trance like effect with the light so dim Slumber I seek to refresh my mind heal my body leave the day behind An ideal day to pass my time I share with you a mental vacation some time away from the zoo
18 Comments
Nepenthe ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜 10w ago
"Nature's TV" - the stanza about this was my favorite part :) I'm really feeling the songs that are paying tribute to nature! This was so pretty and pleasant to listen to! Thank you for submitting! <3
Artimus The Poet 10w ago
Welcome! I was on a business call and wrote it... I needed a Calgon take me away moment.
ᘻadᘻacᑢhad 10w ago
Beautiful lyrics, melody and vocals. Very inviting picture of paradise
Great job. Good luck in the competition. 💥✨💫
SAINT ✞ 10w ago
That lyrics is very good!
Midknightoil ☢ 10w ago
making me want to go off-grid and just forget about the world!
IrateDreadCarp 9w ago
Yass, with no neighbors! Just the wild and the self.
LKN 💚 5w ago
I really like all your choices here. And especially, the job you did with these lyrics... 💚
Artimus The Poet 5w ago
Thanks, I wanted to take everyone on a mental vacation and to change up the usual music people hear here on Suno. Something to cheer the spirit and relax the mind.
The Lone Survivor 5w ago
Love it!!🔥🔥🔥
MuffeTheBadass 7w ago
😍🔥
The Badfatler 7w ago
Ooh, I love the adventurous sound and the lyrics tell a tale that feels distinctly American. Great stuff, Artimus! Good luck for Sunovision!
soul&music 7w ago
A very nice song, resonates with my soul ❣️🫶🎼🦋🎶
JP Asher 7w ago
Really nice atmospheric instrumentation and lyrics. Love the flute. Nice expressive voice and range. Well done. 🙌
Dj ProMusica 9w ago
What a beautiful tapestry of natural imagery. Your lyrics create such a strong sense of place and tranquility. I especially loved the descriptions of the mountainside waterfalls and the starry night🔥🔥🔥🔥
Artimus The Poet 9w ago
I was trying hard to create that mental vacation.
IrateDreadCarp 9w ago
🔥🔥🔥Very Nicely done, very nice. 🔥🔥🔥
Beat 10w ago
Wow great.. 🔥🤍
NonconformistCompositions1674 10w ago
This is crystal gayle waiting to happen. Nice
Greenwolf 10w ago
Nice smooth melody and flow❤
SAINT ✞ 10w ago
I like it !!! 🔥 check me out for nice summer vibes 🥥🌴
Avshalom Agmon 10w ago
nice beat ❤️
Wine loves flowers 10w ago
💗👍💗👍