#SongTwister - 06: The Last Dream

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acoustic pop, ballad, singer-songwriter

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#SONGTWISTER - a StoryTellerZ miniEvent !
Round 06:

A Random Song about Random short story made by Legend´s !

BACKGROUND MASTER:
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Story by @nasty343 <- !!
Meta-Tag´s by @tsaandra <- !!      
Style Prompt by @lijanna <- !!
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[@noxuria]
[Intro – light acoustic strums, warm ambient pads, soft humming]
"Mein... Mein Name ist... ... John... John Smith..."
"Bei Komatösen Halluzinationen handelt sich um eine Bewusstseinsstörung in einem Zustand der Bewusstlosigkeit..."
"Ich... Ich bin fünf und dreißig Jahre alt... und habe ein tolles Leben..."
"Mögliche Ursachen hierfür sind schwere Hirnschädigungen..."

[faint birdsong in the background, dreamy and peaceful mood]

[@kunai_kazekun]
[Verse 1 – clean guitar picking with gentle reverb, soft strings underneath, intimate vocal tone]
A house out in the suburbs on a small and gentle lane,
Roses climbed the railing while the summers lingered plain.
Fence talk with the neighbors, easy shadows, easy time,
A folded set of baby sheets, perfect in my mind.

[faint background of kids playing laughter far away, like a memory]

[@malakay]
[Pre-Chorus – heartbeat sound layered with bass drum, tension building]
[subtle static in background, broken radio effect]
I was a twinkling star bathing in your light
Reflecting and sharing your love felt so right

[@malakay]
[Chorus – emotional alternative rock swell, distorted guitars with restrained edge, melodic but fragile vocals]
Oh Linda
I still remember every word you said
Your warm timbre has never left my ear
Each step I take, I pull a weight
It's hard to believe that you were never real
Oh Linda
The life we never had still burns inside
Your smile remains my bittersweetest memory
We were two forces of nature about to collide
The only truth is what you meant to me

[faint echo of a woman’s laughter deep in the mix]
[bittersweet tone]

[single distant male cry]

[silence for a beat]

[@project_2501]
[Verse 2 – guitars colder, darker tone, piano adds minor notes]
Eyes wide open, but I don’t see you
Eyes wide open, but I’ll never see you
Linda, my baby, I miss you so much
I’d give my life up — just for a touch

And you — so-called angels in white
So glad‘n proud — you’ve torn my life apart
You said it was fiction — coma-born lies
Killed me! — the moment you opened my eyes

[subtle hospital monitor beeps in the distance]
[vocals heavier with grief]

[@project_sky_castle]
[Breakdown – instruments crash into darkness, low drone bass, guttural scream in the distance]
[sound of a man crying intensely]
Das hier ist einfach: nichts für mich.
Hab für das ganze hier nichts übrig
denn das alles hier macht mich verrückt
und zerbricht mich – Stück für Stück 
merk wie es mich innerlich zerdrückt
ich will einfach nur zurück, in meinen Traum vom: Glück...

[static building underneath, reverb tails swallowing the voice]

[@eqvirther]
[Bridge – drums chaotic and uneven, instruments stuttering, breaking down]
[vocals strained and broken, faint gasps layered, breathless crying between lines]
Fluorescent dawn—(ooh)—they speak; I stay.
Porch-light, Linda—(aaahaa)—flares once, then breaks to fray.
I tuck her under my pulse—(ooho)—a quiet underlay.
If none of it was real, what is it my heart replays?
(ooh) — The screen reads: “John Smith, found deceased today.”
(aaahaa) — They cut to “clear and bright”; I mouth her once and fade to gray.... (to gray...)

[@kasane]
[Verse 3 – music detached, hollow atmosphere, reverb widened, synth pads soft but haunting]
Hanna kam vorbei.
"Willst du fort? Willst du fliehen? Willst du weg aus dem hier? Willst du Frei sein?"
Hanna lächelt grausam, ein böses Funkeln in ihren Augen.
"Der Kult des Fleischbarons sucht immer neue Anhänger. 
Entledige dich deiner Angst, deiner Moral, deiner Menschlichkeit.
Entledige dich der Welt, Entledige dich des Seins, Für das Fleisch ist heilig.
Du wirst frei sein, Du wirst Glücklich, Du wirst dem Fleischbaron dienen.
Fleisch für den Fleischbaron."

[faint sound of wind blowing through emptiness]

[@malakay]
[Pre-Chorus]
I'm a shooting star burning up so bright
Without you... I've lost trajectory
Destined to vanish from life...

[@malakay]
[Chorus – explosive alternative rock climax, heavily distorted guitars wide in stereo, deep growling bass, driving drums with crash-heavy accents, soaring emotional lead vocals, raw screams layered with clean vocals]
Oh Linda
I still call your name in sleepless nights
You are the one thing I can't ever miss in life
Each memory of you birthes a smile
That makes me think of better times
Oh Linda
My forever bears your all-so-lovely face
My faith in you promises deliverance
Yet my foolish doubts betrayed your grace
I swear -- No longer will I question your existence

[backing harmonies swelling like a choir, cinematic reverb tail, epic scale]
[faint sobbing layered in mix for desperation]

[@malakay]
[Post-Chorus]
Even if I never really knew you
You left your sweet mark on my heart
And never will I ever forget our promise:
We'd be forever until death do us part

[@noxuria]
[Outro – sudden cut to news report voice, radio effect, crackling static, muffled newsroom background noise]
"Eilmeldung... Der Leichnam wurde identifiziert..."
"Es handelt sich um John Smith... Der junge Mann, der erst kürzlich aus dem Koma erwachte..."
[announcer voice calm and detached, fading into pure static hiss]
[final tone like a dead TV channel]

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"Mögliche Ursachen hierfür sind schwere Hirnschädigungen..." [faint birdsong in the background, dreamy and peaceful mood] [@kunai_kazekun] [Verse 1 – clean guitar picking with gentle reverb, soft strings underneath, intimate vocal tone] A house out in the suburbs on a small and gentle lane, Roses climbed the railing while the summers lingered plain. Fence talk with the neighbors, easy shadows, easy time, A folded set of baby sheets, perfect in my mind. [faint background of kids playing laughter far away, like a memory] [@malakay] [Pre-Chorus – heartbeat sound layered with bass drum, tension building] [subtle static in background, broken radio effect] I was a twinkling star bathing in your light Reflecting and sharing your love felt so right [@malakay] [Chorus – emotional alternative rock swell, distorted guitars with restrained edge, melodic but fragile vocals] Oh Linda I still remember every word you said Your warm timbre has never left my ear Each step I take, I pull a weight It's hard to believe that you were never real Oh Linda The life we never had still burns inside Your smile remains my bittersweetest memory We were two forces of nature about to collide The only truth is what you meant to me [faint echo of a woman’s laughter deep in the mix] [bittersweet tone] [single distant male cry] [silence for a beat] [@project_2501] [Verse 2 – guitars colder, darker tone, piano adds minor notes] Eyes wide open, but I don’t see you Eyes wide open, but I’ll never see you Linda, my baby, I miss you so much I’d give my life up — just for a touch And you — so-called angels in white So glad‘n proud — you’ve torn my life apart You said it was fiction — coma-born lies Killed me! — the moment you opened my eyes [subtle hospital monitor beeps in the distance] [vocals heavier with grief] [@project_sky_castle] [Breakdown – instruments crash into darkness, low drone bass, guttural scream in the distance] [sound of a man crying intensely] Das hier ist einfach: nichts für mich. Hab für das ganze hier nichts übrig denn das alles hier macht mich verrückt und zerbricht mich – Stück für Stück merk wie es mich innerlich zerdrückt ich will einfach nur zurück, in meinen Traum vom: Glück... [static building underneath, reverb tails swallowing the voice] [@eqvirther] [Bridge – drums chaotic and uneven, instruments stuttering, breaking down] [vocals strained and broken, faint gasps layered, breathless crying between lines] Fluorescent dawn—(ooh)—they speak; I stay. Porch-light, Linda—(aaahaa)—flares once, then breaks to fray. I tuck her under my pulse—(ooho)—a quiet underlay. If none of it was real, what is it my heart replays? (ooh) — The screen reads: “John Smith, found deceased today.” (aaahaa) — They cut to “clear and bright”; I mouth her once and fade to gray.... (to gray...) [@kasane] [Verse 3 – music detached, hollow atmosphere, reverb widened, synth pads soft but haunting] Hanna kam vorbei. "Willst du fort? Willst du fliehen? Willst du weg aus dem hier? Willst du Frei sein?" Hanna lächelt grausam, ein böses Funkeln in ihren Augen. "Der Kult des Fleischbarons sucht immer neue Anhänger. Entledige dich deiner Angst, deiner Moral, deiner Menschlichkeit. Entledige dich der Welt, Entledige dich des Seins, Für das Fleisch ist heilig. Du wirst frei sein, Du wirst Glücklich, Du wirst dem Fleischbaron dienen. Fleisch für den Fleischbaron." [faint sound of wind blowing through emptiness] [@malakay] [Pre-Chorus] I'm a shooting star burning up so bright Without you... I've lost trajectory Destined to vanish from life... [@malakay] [Chorus – explosive alternative rock climax, heavily distorted guitars wide in stereo, deep growling bass, driving drums with crash-heavy accents, soaring emotional lead vocals, raw screams layered with clean vocals] Oh Linda I still call your name in sleepless nights You are the one thing I can't ever miss in life Each memory of you birthes a smile That makes me think of better times Oh Linda My forever bears your all-so-lovely face My faith in you promises deliverance Yet my foolish doubts betrayed your grace I swear -- No longer will I question your existence [backing harmonies swelling like a choir, cinematic reverb tail, epic scale] [faint sobbing layered in mix for desperation] [@malakay] [Post-Chorus] Even if I never really knew you You left your sweet mark on my heart And never will I ever forget our promise: We'd be forever until death do us part [@noxuria] [Outro – sudden cut to news report voice, radio effect, crackling static, muffled newsroom background noise] "Eilmeldung... Der Leichnam wurde identifiziert..." "Es handelt sich um John Smith... Der junge Mann, der erst kürzlich aus dem Koma erwachte..." [announcer voice calm and detached, fading into pure static hiss] [final tone like a dead TV channel]

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