I guess you understood that this song is remake. It's hard to call it remastered... The same melody and pronunciation (I love it, just can't change), the same cover image (I love it, just can't change), almost the same lyrics (I love it, just...wait🗿), but the song itself is shorter and with a slightly changed ending. Well, hello, my dear listeners, I usually don't text much in "the author's note" part (Or rather, I usually don't text at all) , but right now I just can't help but share my brilliant stupidity. "Why is he posting this song again, and with the same melody and image? Does he think we have Alzheimer's or something?" You ask me. And I will answer. Suddenly I went back to the Suno app, saw the Remaster button, and tried different versions of different songs, so... now there are no more remaster attempts 😅 (they would have signed somewhere, you only have 5 trial remasters, c'mon) And what I most wanted to remaster was "Revenge on the Red rose", my Magnum Opus (also my most difficult long-term song of ≈320 failed generations, 10 parts at one song with everlasting extended end...), to shorten and improve. As a result, I realized on the last remaster attempt on my "draft" account, and there was no "extend" function in the Suno app yet, so the choice was either to expand and publish such a... not so good option, or simply pull my "draft" account out of the shadows. I decided to do both, cause at least the sound is nicer in v4... So... This is Remaster that should be exist here, but not on the "draft" page (please, not subscribe, it's my sidekick page. There's already a single subscriber who's still waiting for something. My conscience will torture me): https://suno.com/song/ed8e15e9-6ef1-4ee9-a992-24e50640aae2 And this is og song, which you can listen, if you not afraid of 7-minutes songs: https://suno.com/song/132ddfb9-e680-4a5d-ae6b-ed931f33103d It also has remaster now, but c'mon, who's gonna listen 7-minutes? So, I somehow wrote a little too much... One side of the scale, then the other... Anyway, enjoy the song, I guess 🤷‍♂️ **Neopolitan's (Neo) song, Inspired by RWBY** ______________________________ [Instrumental intro] [Verse 1] I feel like I don't have a mouth, but all I want to do is scream. I change myself like gloves, but I can't change destiny. The most devoted part of me has sunk into oblivion, And until I get my revenge, I can't just carry on. [Short instrumental interlude] [Verse 2] I didn't care 'bout flowers, but now there is one that I hate, I want to cut off its dark red bud with my silent blade. But before that, I want to deprive it of the meaning of life To make it feel the pain of deprivation like mine. [Pre-chorus] Hush, quit, mute, cover your mouth, Silence is gold sprinkled with blood. I will shut your mouth with your own hands. Look at your reflection, it's disobedient. [Chorus] No matter what, I want the Rose to wilt, My umbrella will hide It from the rains, Then I'll rip out Its thorns, make them disappear, It is my turn to make It feel pain! And when the Rose clings to life with the tips of Its roots, I'll uproot It and slowly pull off these tips. I'll tear off Its petals one by one, be sure, And I'll set It on fire in Its tears! [Instrumental interlude] [Verse 3] Small, helpless child, are you lost? Let me help you find a way That will lead you, little Rose, to the abyss of despair. I see how your petals and leaves are slowly withering, But don't wanna give you water, I'll give you colored tea. [Pre-chorus] White, brown, pink not so sweet now, Rose-colored eyes turned to grey ones, They're getting bloodshot. Try to collect My reflection fragments in a bowler hat! [Chorus] No matter what, I want the Rose to wilt, My umbrella will hide It from the rains, Then I'll rip out Its thorns, make them disappear, It is my turn to make it feel pain! And when the Rose clings to life with the tips of Its roots, I'll uproot It and slowly pull off these tips. I'll tear off Its petals one by one, be sure, And i'll set it on fire in its tears! [Epic emotional guitar solo] [Short Interlude] (Oh-oh-oh) (Oh-oh-oh) [Bridge] I want my evil grin to be the last thing you see. And when you get to the other side, give it to him. Wither, fade, burn, my little rose, leaving your team. Take my blade or yours, don't care, cause it's the same thing. .... (Oh-oh-oh) (Oh-oh-oh) .... [Pause] [Outro] You can't stop my rage. I'm gonna revenge, And I will revenge... ... But one question creeps into my head: When I take revenge, What should I do next? [End] [End]