Silent Soliloquy

I grew up surrounded by music and musicians, but never learned how to play or read it. I've always liked writing short stories and poems. It's been a while since I've done that and wanted to see if I could write lyrics. I write 100% of the lyrics without any AI, but depend on Suno for the sound. I'm doing my best, but I'm still learning and any advice from other song-writers is welcome. Also, I am extremely busy so as hobby it takes me a while to put out new songs and sometimes reply. I apologize in advance if I miss a song you put out or a comment you made, please know I appreciate you listening.