
Time is Passing By !⏱️
////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Original Guitar : https://suno.com/song/0597f6f3-5b5e-4296-8e36-175dbf6806cb?sh=pAQPXQps5nakzx4f ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Hope you Like It 🤘 ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Sitting silent, side by side Morning light through window panes Want to reach across this space Been this way for days and days Practiced phrases fade away Like breath against the glass My lips move but nothing comes All my words turn to ash Every time I try to speak Something pulls me under Breaking down, but breaking free Feels impossible to wonder Words stuck in my throat Like paper birds that never fly Words stuck in my throat While moments pass us by Pages filled with things to say Locked inside my mind Watching you walk away Leave these thoughts behind Fingers trembling, heart beats fast When you turn to look at me But I'm frozen in this dance Of what could never be Every time I try to speak Something pulls me under Breaking down, but breaking free Feels impossible to wonder Words stuck in my throat Like paper birds that never fly Words stuck in my throat While moments pass us by Time keeps slipping through my hands Like water through my fingers Standing here with heavy heart While this silence lingers Try to find the perfect way To let these feelings show But perfect is the enemy Of everything I know
12 Comments
iLoveSuno 7w ago
Deep emotions, the struggle and silence of unexpressed feelings resonate with me. 😔💭
VJJV4914 7w ago
Thanks for your feedback 🤝. And sorry.
I make melancholic songs because I'm melancholic. I'm glad the song resonated with you, but I didn't want you to feel sad about it, bro 👍.
Old n Crusty Rocker 8w ago
This is excellent!
VJJV4914 8w ago
Thank you very much for the praise. I'm glad you liked the song. 🤘
Sorasan 10w ago
💕💕💕💕
Osmium 196 11w ago
Very cool!!
VJJV4914 11w ago
Thank you! 🤝
Amano 1w ago
The song and composition of a sound, do, in fact, reminiscent of a clocking mechanism: or rather, two different clocks, -- one that is working perfectly fine, the other one is broken, but in a manner where listening to how gears are out of sync makes it oh so alluring.
VJJV4914 1w ago
🔥Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback. Really. These are my early works, when I was just starting to make music in Suno. I was looking for a sense of time in the music and in the picture. I wanted these two things to fit together. And I'm very glad that you felt this tandem.🙌
RASCAL ADVOCATE 2w ago
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😱LOVE THIS ADDED TO FAVORITES
VJJV4914 2w ago
Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it 🔥
Elizeus 2.0 3w ago
Вау, просто мощно! Отличное сочетание музыки и вокала, особенно на припевах🔥🤘
VJJV4914 2w ago
Уведомления конечно, мда. Только сейчас заметил.
Спасибо! Рад, что вам понравилось 🔥🔥🔥
Alexandr Ivanchenko 5w ago
очень хорошая песня. в восьмидесятые с удовольствием слушал бы на сборнике лучшее HMR
VJJV4914 5w ago
Большое спасибо!
Рад, что вам понравилось 🔥🔥🔥 Я и сам без ума от музыки 80-х 🤘
Joanna5141319 5w ago
🫶🍀✨💓ヾ(≧▽≦*)o❤️How many likes do you need to press to get a signature card of yours? Hahahaha. If there are no new songs, I will listen to the old songs again and leave a message. Thank you.
VJJV4914 5w ago
Thank you so much, Joanna! I am so touched by your praise. Your support always warms my heart.🔥❤️🔥✨✨✨
LfRemix64 6w ago
🔥🔥🔥🔥
VJJV4914 6w ago
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it 🙌🙌🙌
Cool happy Cissa 7w ago
🔥🔥🔥🔥
VJJV4914 7w ago
Thank you very much 🤘. I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked this song. 🤝🙌
MagicalFuture 8w ago
Once again a very strong sound, very special, I love something like this 👍👍👍