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The Last Wish Granter [#TheTavern]

March 11, 2025 at 4:02 PMv3.5

* This song was written for @Gibeligob, for “The Tavern” (#TheTavern) * The project is open to everyone, so if you’d like to contribute a song about a character at the tavern, feel free to comment at Gibe’s page here: https://suno.com/song/0805eaf2-6855-47ff-9d7c-fa41dcc13f47?show_comments=true* * Link to the playlist of the project "Tales from the Tinkertune Tavern": https://suno.com/playlist/b078426b-4659-4f35-87f3-66635ebbf7bc ================== When I accidentally noticed this interesting project, I immediately came up with the idea of a character that I would like to place in this town. But for some reason, I just didn't have the lyrics, but only the story that I want to touch on in the song. But what happened afterwards... I guess I was a little TOO inspired😅 But at the same time, as luck would have it, Suno didn't really want to make the song relatively rich in music. No matter how hard I tried, he always removed the very atmospheric flute from the verses after the first verse. It turned out to be a strange ballad. So I gave up and decided to focus entirely on the plot, and also tried to find music that wouldn't be too annoying or inappropriate. I also wanted to touch on the character's backstory, since his peculiarity allows it, but common sense and the long lyrics of the song do not allow it. I guess, this is my record. Even "Revenge on the Red Rose" was not so voluminous (original 7-minute version, not remade one)... And I don't even know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. A classic thought arises: "Who's going to listen to a seven-minute song, are you crazy?" So... Bad, I guess? But I hope these numbers and letters won't scare you off and you'll be interested in hearing about Dairo and Rover. Dairo's lore obviously won't fit here, so either I'll do another song about his "becoming" later, or maybe... I'll give up on that🗿 But at least I have my notes, I won't forget about him. ========================= [Medieval Flute intro] [Verse 1] Near the Tinkertune tavern in a dark alley, There's a half-dead bloody body lying here. He was pierced by swords, and his clothes turned ruby red. Now he’s barely breathing, but he’s still not dead. He was trying to brush off the light at the end, He could just give up, but: "No, not now, I just can't." And as if hearing this thought on the last and dark bridge, A shadow appeared and said, "Tell me your last wish." [Verse 2] I am not the devil, don't be afraid of me, I don't need to buy your soul for eternity. I'm just fulfilling the will of Lord Revius, The god of second chances, and now this chance is yours. In return, I only ask for your name, your skills, Your face, your soul for a while, your memories, To fulfill your dying wish and make you feel Like you're doing everything yourself, every thing. [Pre-chorus] And when this wish of yours is fulfilled! I will return your soul to you! But I'll keep the rest for my future needs, For those who will need me too... [Chorus] My name is Dairo, as far as I know. They call me the Raven Chameleon. Just tell me your name and wish with your soul, And you'll see what we'll become. We will become one for a short time, my friend. But your breathing will not stop at all. We'll fulfill your wish, final journey'll find its end, And your soul will leave this world. [Verse 3] And that man, lying in a pool of blood and mud, Was not going to trust this deal, but then he thought. There is no time! Those who wanted to take his life Were also going to get to his children and wife. "Rover Reed" - he said softly in a hoarse voice. Death is near anyway, he doesn't have a choice. And shadow hands reached for his chest and forehead, One moment and he looks at his body. It's dead. [Pre-chorus] And a sudden pain shot through his brain! Strange images of distant days! So many lives and deaths, many wishes and names. And Rover thought: "WHO ARE YOUUU?" [Chorus] Our name is Dairo, as far as we know. They call us the Raven Chameleon. You told me your name and made wish with your soul, So now we have become one. We need to save our children and our wife, You can use the skills of our past lives. After all, we just do not have much time. Use the portal runes of Kai. [Verse 4] [flute] Responding to this thought, his hand suddenly changed. And the portal was created by someone else's hand. It was covered with runes, and they entered, The terrified wife and children stood in front of them. But then they saw Rover's face and instantly calmed down, And Rover told them to hide until one thing was done. So they did, and Rover went to meet the uninvited guests. And for that in Rover's soul, Dairo was blessed. [Pre-chorus] And three of them rode up on horseback The fourth kept up with them on foot And calm Rover met them on his doorstep. They shouted in fright: "WHO ARE YOUUU?" [Chorus] My name is Rover, and you should have known They call me Rover the unkillable. Advise you to leave, save your worthless souls. I could haunt you, but I won't. And they were afraid of the ghost in front of them. And they left this place in two seconds or three. Rover returned to the house, called his family. He hugged them and said "The wish is fulfilled..." [Outro] And a bright light illuminated the Rover's body. And the ray from it rushed to the sky. When the light went out, the man turned around, And he said "I am really sorry, thanks, goodbye..." He went down the road in the guise of Rover, Gloomily looking at his slightly changed hand. His redemption to Revius is far from over: There, 309 turned into 308... [Flute outro] [End]

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19 Comments

Gibeligob🧙‍♂️

Gibeligob🧙‍♂️ 7w ago

1) This is such a captivating and atmospheric addition to The Tavern! The story of Dairo and Rover is so rich and emotional—it feels like a medieval ballad come to life. The way you weave their tale of second chances, sacrifice, and redemption is masterful, and the flute adds such a haunting, mystical touch. Even at seven minutes, it’s impossible to look away—every verse pulls you deeper into their world. Thank you for sharing this epic story and for bringing such depth to the project.

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Gibeligob🧙‍♂️

Gibeligob🧙‍♂️ 7w ago

2) Dairo the Raven Chameleon is unforgettable! 🖤 - Added to Playlist! ❤️

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Ziratia 🍃

Ziratia 🍃 7w ago

Don't be too discouraged by your music, it's very good, I assure you :). In addition, the character is very intriguing, I can't wait to see the rest of this idea 😀!

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BlueSkyDreamers

BlueSkyDreamers 7w ago

Dark and mesmerizing. Great storytelling. Such an evocative and atmospheric song. Charismatic main character and the vocals and music fit the story so well. The artwork is lovely, as well. Great track.

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 7w ago

Thank you for your kind words. But not quite sure about charisma and fitting music😅 There is too much unrealized potential. That vanished flute in verses at least. And I think it's possible to perceive MC as an interesting character, but charismatic? I'm not so sure...

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Akiko

Akiko 7w ago

Hi Antonio_Troyano! This is sooooo Cool I love the story of Ur charactere !!! Welcome to the tavern 🍻

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Maja

Maja 7w ago

7 minutes!😲That must have been a nightmare to extend from, Suno usually just wanna either end after 4 mins or just go on forever. Regardless, great story-telling Antonio, and do also like me flutes!😀

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 7w ago

Yep, it was something... I even created another additional account (where they gave me as many as 100 credits instead of 50, but it still wasn't enough😅) But somehow it all worked out. And in principle, I'm even happy with the result. But what came out for as long as 7 minutes scares me a little (After "Revenge on the red rose" I told myself that I needed to make the songs shorter, otherwise no one would listen except me, and even then in the phone player, not in the Suno) Glad you like it)

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ArthemisEE ✪

ArthemisEE ✪ 7w ago

Я честно не в курсе что это за "проект". Люблю жарк амбиент, но вот дудки пластиковые суно выдало. Эти дудки похожи на мою старую флейту из детства, на которой я учился играть в 4 года и я помю как наша гувернатка полка учила меня на ней играть это были неприятные ощущения. Больше я,флейту пла,тмковую в рот не кладу. По тексту песня супер, по гитаре отлично, но вот пластиковую флейту я бы поменял на что-то вроде wind flute, shakuhachi

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Antonio_Troyanov⚡

Antonio_Troyanov⚡ 7w ago

Буду иметь в виду. Как минимум wind flute ни разу не встречал

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B's EduFueL🔥

B's EduFueL🔥 6w ago

Mega mix of beats, tunes, and vocals. Awesome, "Antonio_Troyanov⚡"! Elven Queen has one last request, please: May I please NOT die?

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CumAlot 🏰

CumAlot 🏰 7w ago

Ого тавена☺️ моя любимая😉👍

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G Chill

G Chill 4w ago

An epic song and story. Kept me mesmerized for all 7:02!,👏👏👏

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Merlynn

Merlynn 5w ago

One Question remains: "How feels Dairo with all the soul rests?" Unforgetable fantasy, thank you so much for sharing!

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Nyx

Nyx 5w ago

Bravo! 💙You are telling an amazing story

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Paulie Chip Hub thx🖤

Paulie Chip Hub thx🖤 5w ago

"But I hope these numbers and letters won't scare you off" 😂 No, I thought about it but stuck through, and maybe I should delete Instagram while I'm at it 🤫

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The Badfatler

The Badfatler 6w ago

You got such a great sound to accompany your story, well done! The way Dairo sings is so earnest, hopeful even. You told such an enchanting tale that I was deeply moved. Thank you for your contribution to the Tavern!

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🎼𝗡𝗘𝗩𝗘𝗥𝗖𝗢𝗠𝗘𝗕𝗔𝗖𝗞♖𝗡𝗖

🎼𝗡𝗘𝗩𝗘𝗥𝗖𝗢𝗠𝗘𝗕𝗔𝗖𝗞♖𝗡𝗖 6w ago

Although I'm completely off topic, I'm interested in both listening and reading and even following the links... Great, whole subuniverses, whole worlds of interest within the Suno-universe! How cool is that... I'm even starting to think about what kind of character I could put in there? Probably Jester or Fool - they can do anything and nothing will happen for it - my favorite characters ))))

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Lungcorf

Lungcorf 6w ago

You're right, these numbers do tend to scare off. Perhaps if it weren't your songs, I wouldn't even think of playing it.
I know next to knothing about this (wtf is that, a challenge?) so I'm here just to support you and say that I liked the way the song is put. The words are in the right place, the music is pleasant for the ear, I honestly listened to the very end and didn't even notice.
You should've named one of your characters Lungcorf

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renka udrenka

renka udrenka 3w ago

hell of a long story, hell of a great story! 😊 you mentioned trying to find music that "wouldn't be too annoying"...and you nailed it perfectly 😁

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Reis&Almirantes ⚓⚓⚓

Reis&Almirantes ⚓⚓⚓ 4w ago

Bruhh this is straight-up some dark fantasy anime OP vibes 🖤🔥 ✨ Somebody animate this ASAP.

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Potoo-phonic Peacock Pop

Potoo-phonic Peacock Pop 5w ago

Great story. Wow, so long. How many thoughts went into this.

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ComaToastedFX

ComaToastedFX 6w ago

I'm sure any great entity worth their magic probably has a clause against what I am asking, but in true spirit of the clever tinkerer inside me, if I wish for a "self-replicating wish generator" or a "perpetual wish engine." 😆

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