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Die Love You

Modified poem of the same name I wrote more than 10 years ago on Devia
February 13, 2025 at 2:32 PMv4

[verse] [soft, whispered, seductive falsetto delivery] Lay still—let the night swallow your breath. My hands trace the weight of longing, Heat lingers between shallow whispers. Skin against skin, silence pressed to lips… [pre-chorus] [melodic but uneasy, tension builds] Your pulse is trembling, your body bends, Fingers carve scripture in sweat. Kisses leave wounds that never heal— Deeper… deeper… deeper… [chorus] [crushing, heavy guitars, soaring tenor vocals] YES. YES. YES. Rapture crashes like a storm— A gasp. A tremor. A final, blissful surrender. Your body clenches around the inevitable, Drowning in the spiraling void… Where love forgets itself. [verse] [haunting clean vocals, eerily calm before the next explosion] Oh, love—how fragile beneath the blade. A whisper of steel against porcelain skin, A cruel baptism in crimson devotion. Your eyes widen—too late, too late… [breakdown] [brutal low growls, drop D# chugging riffage, absolute carnage] STILLNESS. The scent of iron lingers. Your warmth fades, yet I remain— Bathed in the ruin of you. This is love. This is the only way I know how to love. [bridge] [ethereal, eerie clean vocals, tension rises again] A gasp—A tremor—A final, blissful surrender… [guitar solo] [melodic yet discordant; slow bends, eerie sustains, chaotic climaxes.] [outro] [soft whispers fading into nothingness] Stillness… One swift breath, then nothing… The red baptism is complete… Die. Love. You. [Fade to end] [End] [End]

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4 Comments

Fractal

Fractal 13w ago

I LOVE this! I don't know why it took me this long to check this out, but better late than never! Absolute banger🔥🔥🔥!!

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Zer0blivion

Zer0blivion 13w ago

Thanks Friend, I sincerely appreciate that. Its from a poem I wrote 10 years ago on DeviantArt. And with a little help from NeckbeardSlayer, I made sure to make it a banger!

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Busy

Busy 14w ago

Right On! 🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟

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Zer0blivion

Zer0blivion 14w ago

Yippee! Glad you like it!

Walklook

Walklook 16w ago

Great vocals!

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Zer0blivion

Zer0blivion 16w ago

Thanks Friend, greatly appreciate it

Greenwolf

Greenwolf 16w ago

Good lyrics and nice mix of vocals

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Zer0blivion

Zer0blivion 16w ago

Thanks bro, much appreciated.

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