🌕月と太陽 ☀️ _______________________________ | by @princessakikoheartfield | Original lyrics without AI _______________________________ こんにちわそれともこんばんは みんなさん! げんきでいることおねがています! 💕 Hello or good evening everyone! I hope you are well! First of all, I thank you for your warm encouragement on my previous music and it really did me good to know that there were people as adorable and awesome as you here! I love you! Let’s get serious! For a few days I was thinking about a collaboration with to do with a precious friend of SUNO (which should probably arrive in the next days ) I drifted during these reflections and an idea came to me, I wanted to learn more about Japanese poetry in particular. This traditional culture has always intrigued me. I was quite inspired by the work of 裴 芸 who created music in Chinese very atmospheric, for some that are poems and especially on a theme that I appreciate "horror". 裴 芸 is an artist who has a lot of talent and that’s music are really immersive. I advise you to take a look at her SUNO page to discover her universe: https://suno.com/@200bcpuiwan But also by the beautiful music "青 鸟 与 喜 鹊" written by MatchaChocolate69 who is an incredible artist: ready to raise again musical and linguistic challenge. (he leaves especially in Japan in the next days, I wish him a good trip again 🌸) Here is a link to this music that I would like to share with you: https://suno.com/song/90c35b69-eb97-4d9f-8ef4-351725a50ce3 I wanted to redo so remake a text in this theme too but finally it’s finished in love story! The love story between the moon and the sun. I have noticed that these two entities are often the subject of Japanese poems. During my research I discovered many types of existing poetry and decided to dig the Haibun and the Shigin (詩 吟). The Haïbun contains one or two parts Haïku (俳 句) which is a very short reflexive poem, containing only 5/7/5 - 17 mores (to make simple the mores are "syllables") and a part in prose. The Shigin (詩 吟) is a poetry recited or sung orally in Chinese or Japanese that contains at least 4 paragraphs. Haïku examples: 名 月 や 松 に か ゝ れ ば 松 の\33457 The beautiful moon is on the pines like a pine flower — 松 岡 青 蘿 Seira Matsuoka Summer Hats... Reflecting the sun Rivage. — 加 藤 楸 邨 Kato Shuson As for the instrumental part, I wanted to do something traditional with instruments typical of Japan including the Shakuhachi and the Koto and of course accompanied by a little piano. I was inspired by a music from the anime Naruto that always makes me cry when I hear it, Sadness and Sorrow, if you are curious I put the YT link here: https://youtu.be/4pSJ8DDwS38 - If you noticed I made sure that the poem can read it in both directions. from beginning to end and from end to beginning. It’s the first time I make it so it is probably with lot of mistakes but I hope you like it anyway! I wish you a good listening my friends ! 💕 English translation at the end _______________________________ "このあいだ つきがめざめる なみだいた" "儚い歌が天の永遠を越えて響く。 歌詞は時間の無限の中に消えていく。 この時間の流れ止まぬ次元において、 記憶の亡霊だけが我らの本質を見守り、残り続ける。" "親愛なる太陽よ、 星座は時間を超えて広がり、 それぞれの星があなたの魂のメロディーを歌う。 私の悲しみは彼らの優しい言葉の暖かさの中で共鳴し、 静かな水面に咲く蓮のように。" "黄昏に、私たちは出会いました。あなたが私を待っているかもしれないと思う。私はあなたを恋しく思う。これらの繰り返される別れがどれほど苦しいか、あなたは理解していますか？私がこの澄んだ空であなたのもとへ行く時がくるのを その瞬間、ためらうことなくあなたの腕に身をゆだねる。道の分かれ目にたどり着くまで。ゆっくりと。私たちは、夜明けに出会った。" "愛しい月よ、 我が心は柔らかく君を見守る、 神聖な出会いへと刻まれる瞬間のすべて。 君の輝きなき人生など、私には無意味な影でしかない。 広い青空の中、雲は我が夢の使者となり、 心からの供物のように君へと向かう。" "苦悩する者たちと消え去った喜びの淡い輝き。 この無上の美を見つめる。 心がこの瞬間に溶け合う中で。 風の中で囁かれる暖かさ。" "あたたかい ひのでのひかり このあいだ" _______________________________ "The other day the moon awakened with tears in its eyes" "A fleeting song resonates beyond the eternity of the heavens. Its lyrics vanish into the infinity of time. In this dimension where the flow of time never ceases, only the ghosts of memory continue to watch over and linger upon our essence." "Dear sun, The constellations stretch beyond time, Each star sings the melody of your soul. My sorrow resonates in the warmth of their gentle words, Like a lotus blooming on a calm water surface." "In the twilight, we met. I think you might be waiting for me. I long for you. Do you understand how painful these repeated farewells are? When the time comes for me to go to you in this clear sky, in that moment, without hesitation, I'll surrender to your arms. Until we reach the crossroads. Slowly. We met at dawn." "Beloved moon, My heart tenderly watches over you, Marking every moment leading to our sacred meeting. A life without your radiance is merely a meaningless shadow to me. In the vast blue sky, the clouds become the messengers of my dreams, Reaching out to you like an offering from the heart." "The faint glow of vanished joy with those who suffer. Gazing upon this supreme beauty. As hearts melt into this moment. The warmth whispered in the wind." "The warm light of the sunrise in the meantime" _______________________________
74 Comments
CumAlot 🏰 8w ago
it's excellent😯such a tender and romantic story in the traditional Japanese manner, a beautiful and relaxing performance🫠I'm more impressed that you keep releasing different music and it always turns out well, your creativity and eagerness to share your music gives a great boost of positivity for the whole day✨💖I'm glad you don't let us get bored, akiko😊💖
Akiko 8w ago
Hi CumAlot Castle! Thanks for listening to this music, I'm glad you relaxed by this music. I really wanted to bring a Zen side that is significant of Japanese culture, the fact that you felt it is really a pure bliss for me! I like to create sounds based on my inspiration of the moment. Without boasting, I have a really broad mind! I'm glad you're not bored with my different style of music! I can’t wait to listen more of Ur song 💕
躺平聽歌 8w ago
好美的歌聲伴著優雅演奏，十分感動✨
Akiko 8w ago
Dear 躺平聽歌! I wish I could answer you in chinese but I'm not used to this language at all! I'm really glad you found this music moving, thank you for your support 😊 Take care my friend 💕
Nenolo 8w ago
My sweet, this is so wonderful and soothing. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us. 🫂🫂❤️❤️
Akiko 8w ago
My dear Nenolo, i'm so happy to have U here. Ur words mean a lot. U're so precious to me, thank U for Ur support 🫂 💕
竜宮式 8w ago
When sushi crosses the Pacific Ocean, it somehow turns into a California Roll, but that's perfectly fine with me 😊. What makes me happiest of all is Akiko's desire to take on the challenge of a Japanese-style approach 🎶. I think this song is not a California Roll, but truly authentic sushi 👍.
Akiko 8w ago
Salut 竜宮式! Haha, this is more like French sushi 🤭 I'm really glad you have more since you're of Japanese origin! Yes I like to challenge myself and I have to say it's not obvious at all but it was a pure pleasure to work on this music and understand this culture even better ☺️Take care my friend 💕
桜子 8w ago
Akiko, it's a wonderful Japanese song. The shakuhachi and piano create a beautiful harmony.🌸 I was very moved by the poignant love between the moon and the sun. Especially the dialogue part was so good that I almost cried towards the end. It's a fantastic song.👍💕
Akiko 8w ago
Dear 桜子, 🌸 Thanks for your appreciation! I admit that I was afraid to be totally on the side of the subject with this music so knowing that you love it is a blessing for me! 🥰 The dialogue part is also my favorite part! I'm also thrilled to have made you feel these emotions 💕
Gibeligob🧙♂️ 8w ago
My dear friend Akiko, this is pure magic🧙♂️. Your exploration of Japanese poetry and the love story between the moon and sun is so beautifully crafted. 🌕☀️The Haibun and Shigin elements add such depth, and the way the poem reads both ways is genius. You’ve created something timeless and deeply soulful. Thank you for sharing this piece of your heart with us.💕
Akiko 8w ago
My dear friend! Thanks for this wonderful detailed comment and I'm delighted every time I see you on my comment thread! Thanks for your support! The fact that you find this piece timeless and deepness gives me even more courage to make other pieces, I hope your day/night goes well 💕
Arash.Ash 8w ago
Dear Akiko ,What a beautiful and delightful song you’ve created! The lyrics are so beautiful and impactful. Once again, you’ve shown your talent and creativity!💙👍
Akiko 8w ago
Dear Arash! Thank U so much for coming listening to this music! I love Ur music it’s a pur delight for ears every time! Thank U for the compliment! I think i have much creativity than talent but Ur word mean a lot for me. Because U are a beatiful person and incredibly artist as well 😊💕
Excavator 8w ago
Hi Akiko, Wonderful! You have captured the hearts of Japan! I support your efforts! If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. (You can ask about my songs!) First, I will give you some quick feedback. Your poem is technically a Senryu poem. Senryu poems use colloquial language and have no restrictions on the words and expressions used, so they are recommended as an introduction. I think it would be a good idea to look into Senryu as well.✨
Akiko 8w ago
Hi my dear friend! I'm delighted to know that I won the hearts of the Japanese, it's the best compliment I could get on this song so a huge thank you 😊 Oh it's a Senryu then! I still have a long way to go then! It would be a pleasure to discuss with you all this when I look at the writing of another poem in Japanese. Ideas are coming right now; I'm having trouble knowing or giving a head. I appreciate everything you do for me, I wish you the best day possible 😊💕
Reis&Almirantes ⚓⚓⚓ 8w ago
These words are so poetic and deep! I feel like I’m floating in a dream with them. 🌙✨
Akiko 8w ago
Hi Reis&Almirantes! This is a delighted U love the poetic words in this track, I hope Ur travel in the dreamland was pleasant, thank U for listening 💕
🆕💿MatchaChocolate69🖤 8w ago
1 Bien qu'ils aient de nombreuses différences, les haïkus m'ont toujours rappelé
l'hermétisme italien, mon style de poésie préféré.
Ce que j'envie aux deux styles, c'est leur capacité à dire énormément avec très peu de mots, et ces mots évoquent des émotions.
Le haïku est certainement plus rigide et codifié. J'aime le comparer à une photographie.
Un instantané d'un moment. Alors que l'hermétisme est plutôt la transcription de pensées fragmentées et fugaces. Les deux sont essentiels et brefs.
🆕💿MatchaChocolate69🖤 8w ago
2 Des considérations non sollicitées, mais que j'écris spontanément en écoutant cette merveilleuse chanson, parce que oui, c'est une excellente bande-son pour réfléchir.
La mélodie mélancolique mais harmonieuse accompagne mes pensées et me permet d'écrire ces mots librement.
Oh, ma chère Akiko, ton talent avec Suno est désormais plus évident que jamais. La qualité du son est parfaite. Je me demande combien de temps
tu as travaillé sur cette piste, et tout ce travail se "ressent".
FOX UDON 8w ago
✨ This song beautifully captures the fleeting yet eternal essence of haiku and shigin—a love that reaches beyond time, much like the moon and sun in Japanese poetry. Its structured lyricism and longing echo the depth of mono no aware, making it a truly poetic and immersive piece. 💫
Akiko 8w ago
Hi FOX UDON! I'm really glad you like this song and even more knowing that is very familiar with this language 🥰 It shows that my efforts have not been in vain, I'm really touched that you felt immersed in this music. I wish U a good day/night 💕
AriteAL 8w ago
I loved how gently you expressed the unreachable connection between the moon and sun. Your poetic words traveling beyond time truly resonated 🌱💚
Akiko 8w ago
Hi AriteAL! I'm glad U loved this track and the gentle expression of this love. Thank again for Ur kind words, U are amazing and I love Ur music 😊💕
G Chill 8w ago
such an entrancing ballad and the way the instrumentals are sprinkled in just makes that much more mesmerizing (the shakhuhachi is sooo beautiful, the koto as well), replaying several times now, thank you, Akiko, starting my morning right!! 🙏😍
Akiko 8w ago
My dearest friend, I'm glad your morning started well with this music and I hope the rest of the day has been in the same picture! It's the best compliment to know that you've played it many times, take care of yourself especially 💕
jimmydsausage 8w ago
Breathtakingly beautiful....I have " the man in the moon" tattooed on my arm ..along with a sun...I'll now be thinking of this song everytime I look at it..exceptional 😎👊
Akiko 8w ago
Hi Jimmy! It's a real pleasure to see U here! Knowing that you're going to think about this music when you look at your tattoo is a real honor! Come back and listen to it whenever U want! I'm glad U liked it! Thank U! And see U soon my friend 💕
RB/Z(Rabbit＿Baron/Zen) 8w ago
Hello friend! Thank you for loving Japanese poetry😆 Haiku (俳句)and tanka(短歌)express feelings and scenes figuratively, so you should be able to learn beautiful words and expressions🌟 If you have any questions about Japanese, I can help you❤️🔥 It's great to start with the moon (sunset 日の入り:hinoiri) and end with the sunrise to close the song🌟 This is a technique called "contrast対比:taihi" that is done to emphasize the difference or change by comparing two things🌸
Akiko 8w ago
My dear Friend! My dear friend! I love learning more about everything this country has to offer me, Japanese poetry is really beautiful! Thanks for your proposal this would be nice 😊 I have learn one more think today! Thank U to sharing this to me, I am so happy. I'm also glad you like my composition and the fact that I started with the moon and ended with the sunrise 🫶💕
🛑 Lucilius 🛑 8w ago
Cette chanson japonaise est très saisissante Akiko. C'est un très bel hommage que tu rends à cette culture, tout en délicatesse. Tu as été très inspirée, et surtout tu savais à l'avance ce que tu souhaitais, ce qui t'as permis de choisir la bonne structure pour le texte et les bons mots-clés pour le style musical. Merci pour ton partage.
Akiko 8w ago
Salut lucilius, merci pour ton soutien sans faille. Je voulais vraiment rendre hommage à cette culture que j'adore et que je ressens à chaque instant. Merci à toi pour ta présence bienveillante et à l'écoute 🤍💕
Graou 8w ago
Tu bosses vraiment énormément tes prods. Ça fait plaisir a voir. Félicitations Akiko
Akiko 8w ago
Salut Hadd! Merci beaucoup pour le compliment ! Je me donne toujours à fond pour être totalement satisfaite de mes prods! Je suis contente que tu sois venue ecouter la musique j’espère que tu l’as aimé! A bientôt j’espère 💕
E/V 🦇 ǝɹı̣dɯɐꓥ ɔı̣uoɹʇɔǝןƎ 🦇 8w ago
The vocals cascade with a plangent tenderness, beautiful ... Akiko ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Akiko 8w ago
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The Badfatler 8w ago
Hello, Akiko! Jaoanese culture, and their poetry in particular, are fascinating and beautiful. I've been studying it as a hobby for years. My nropther and I actually write Haibun back and for as a form of literary practice, also it's just fun.
I adore this song! The loving relationship between the Sun and Moon are clear, and your instrumentals pull at my heartstrings almost as much as your lyrics. Incredible job!
Akiko 8w ago
Hello, The Badfatler! Yes, this culture is really fascinating! I didn't know you were writing it with your mother! You must have more experience in the field than I do then! I still have a long way to go! Friends of SUNO Japanese who listened to the music gave me valuable information to help me improve! 💕 I'm really glad you love this music, I thought the relationship between his two entities could only be a good start! Thank U so much for Ur kind words I hope Ur day/night doing well 💕
Cool happy Cissa 8w ago
Dear Akiko You are always so thoughtful and poetic! Love everything you do! Thank you for being a positive force in our Suno community!
Akiko 8w ago
Dear Cool happy Cissa! I'm soo glad U loved it~ Thank U for Ur support! I appreciate U and Ur smiling music 💕