Oh, she cried out loud, with a desperate plea

Here's the revised song with an additional verse: (Intro) (Soft, atmospheric music) In the silence, a voice whispered low A warning sign, a premonition to know A 16-year-old's heart, beating with a sigh A sense of urgency, a desperate cry (Verse 1) On a Sunday, September 17th, 2000 A 16-year-old's heart was beating like a drum She felt a sense of urgency, a warning sign A premonition that her grandmother's time was running out of line (Pre-Chorus) A feeling deep inside, a sense of despair A warning sign, a premonition that she couldn't share She tried to shake it off, but it lingered on A feeling that her grandmother's time was almost gone (Chorus) Oh, she cried out loud, with a desperate plea "Father, please, take me to see her, before she's gone from me" The day before, a warning sign A premonition that would change everything in time (Verse 2) She shouted, yelled, screamed, and cried Begging her father to listen, to hear her desperate sigh The weight of her words, the tears she did cry A 16-year-old's intuition, that her grandmother's time was saying goodbye (Pre-Chorus) A feeling deep inside, a sense of despair A warning sign, a premonition that she couldn't share She tried to shake it off, but it lingered on A feeling that her grandmother's time was almost gone (Chorus) Oh, she cried out loud, with a desperate plea "Father, please, take me to see her, before she's gone from me" The day before, a warning sign A premonition that would change everything in time (Verse 3) In the stillness of the night, she heard a gentle voice Whispering words of comfort, a heartfelt, sorrowful choice To let go of the fear, to trust in fate's design And find solace in the memories, the love they left behind (Pre-Chorus) A feeling deep inside, a sense of despair A warning sign, a premonition that she couldn't share She tried to shake it off, but it lingered on A feeling that her grandmother's time was almost gone (Chorus) Oh, she cried out loud, with a desperate plea "Father, please, take me to see her, before she's gone from me" The day before, a warning sign A premonition that would change everything in time (Bridge) September 18th, the day that would come A day of sorrow, a day of mourning, a day of being undone But on that Sunday, September 17th, she knew A premonition that would stay with her, forever true (Chorus) Oh, she cried out loud, with a desperate plea "Father, please, take me to see her, before she's gone from me" The day before, a warning sign A premonition that would change everything in time (Outro) A 16-year-old's heart, beating with a warning sign A premonition that would stay with her, forever aligned With the memory of her grandmother, and the love they did share A premonition that would remain, forever beyond compare.